A new attempt
Warning: abruptness and that's it
Who would have thought that after three years a couple that ended due to misunderstandings would meet again? But now they want to try again in a strange place with six more unknown people.
The next morning, I hear a woman (fourth floor) screaming from below, where the playground and a fake pool are. I get up to leave the room and go down the stairs to find more people (the other floors).
"And who are you?" I say confused, looking at everyone, but I realize Chun-ja is there; it seems she didn’t notice my presence.
After deciding not to say our names but instead refer to the floor we were on, we start looking at the other rooms and realize that each floor has a different-sized room and that each person earns a different amount for every minute others spend there. Night falls, and everyone enters their rooms. I go up the stairs; just before opening my room, someone corners me against the wall, putting their leg between mine. With one hand, they grab both of my hands so I can't move them. I realize it's Chun-ja.
"Chun-ja?" I say, scared and a bit bewildered.
Before I can speak again, Chun-ja starts kissing me, introducing her tongue into my mouth. We don’t last long due to lack of air and separate.
"Why have you been ignoring me all damn day?" she says angrily, panting a bit and breathing quickly due to lack of air.
"Look who's talking; I wasn't even ignoring you. You were the one ignoring me," I say angrily, struggling to free myself from her grip. "Let me go, second floor," I say angrily, moving to get her to release me.
"I'm not second floor; I'm Chun-ja. Don’t you remember those nights we shared?" she says playfully as her hand moves to my waist, pulling me closer.
"Fuck you, second floor! I don’t want to get back together since you cheated on me with that girl," I say angrily, holding back my tears.
Abruptly, Chun-ja lets me go and steps back a few paces from me, turning her back.
"She was my best friend; she wasn’t my lover. She was married, and I had you," she says seriously, turning to look at me. "If you had just let me explain, we would have never broken up. You know how much I love you; there isn’t a day that goes by when I'm not thinking about you," she says with a slight smile as if recalling our past together.
"It doesn’t matter anymore; I love you just as much. During these three years, I haven't stopped thinking about you either," I say now a bit less angry as I stand up straight. "But why did you come so abruptly to kiss me?"
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Chun-ja approaches me again, but gently, placing her hands on my cheeks and leaving her face just a few inches from mine.
"Why, after so long, do I see you again and didn't think about it and kissed you?" she says nervously and happily. "You don't know how much I missed your lips," she whispers affectionately.
She kisses me again, but this time more softly, more lovingly, lowering her hands to my waist while I place my hands on her shoulders. We separate from the kiss.
"Chun-ja, we should go into my room," I say softly, whispering in her ear and smiling slightly.
"Okay, let's go in," she says with a smile as her hands gently caress my back.
We separate to open the door to the room, and then Chun-ja and I enter hand in hand.
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