#47098

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台風といえばミリバール世代のみんな～

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@47098

hello again. rip 

I REALLY like this dude. hes one of my faves?

WARNING: talks about a Lot of death and experimentation. Hope thats okay!

I love characters themed around death and experimentation, so Yes we’re all good.

Name: AUSCUL ASNERI

Name comes from Auscultation, or the sound of listening to certain organs. Asneri is a mush up of the word Arsenic. 

Now this to me immediately reminds me of like… those “doctors” in the old days who would offer medical assistance to people, bring them in, and then slowly poison them to death with arsenic for kicks. Which happened WAY more often than you think it would. I can think of like, 4 nurse/doctor arsenic poisoners off the top of my head. 

Handle: iterativeChemist [IC]

WEAPON: Stethoscope, which he uses to press against walls and listen for when his enemies come closer. 

Oo, I do like this, but I have to wonder how often it could be used for an actual weapon? Maybe you could have him use a poisonkind specibus too, just for some on the downlow murdering?

INVENTORY: OPERATION! there is a model of a troll body, and he has to uses tweezers to pull the inventory card that he desires out. If he fails, it buzzes and he has to start over. 

That’s Ominous.

QUIRK:

uses ≡ after all Os and Hs, representing how acids ususally contain oxygen and hydrogen. Makes a lot of chemistry puns. Also mentions acids a lot, even going so far as so copy/paste their formulas when talking about them. ALSO talks about anatomy a lot.

example:

O≡, yo≡’re really burning up to≡igh≡! I’m excited to see ho≡ th≡s go≡s! Yo≡r to≡uch stubs seem to≡ be swo≡en! Did yo≡ kno≡ th≡t a co≡mo≡ sympto≡ o≡ th≡ co≡mo≡ co≡d is th≡t yo≡r fingers swell? No≡ to≡ wo≡ry, th≡ugh≡! I can examine yo≡ fo≡ no≡ co≡t!

I do like this, but it’s a little hard to read. I think maybe if you didn’t replace the letters, but instead just have the ≡ come after the o/h and leave it at that? ex: “Yo≡ur to≡uch≡ stubs seem to≡ be swo≡llen.”

LUSUS: A venus flytrap with long, disgusting tentacle-roots that pulls trolls into it’s maw. Auscul originally brought trolls just to satiate it, but eventually decided that he wanted to try and experiment on them as well. They were going to die anyways, right?

Ooo, I love that. We’ve not really gotten many plant creature lusii, but I approve of them. Maybe you could do something with the arsenic theme, too? Like have the plant excrete fly-water, which is an arsenic-heavy sweet solution used to attract and then poison flies? It could be part of what Auscul uses! 

INTERESTS:

CHEMISTRY SCIENCE (ANY AND ALL) JOURNALIST RESEARCH DESTRUCTION (for ‘research’) DISMANTLING THINGS (for ‘research’) REVERSE ENGINEERING disguises psychology

With the medical theme and stuff, you’ve definitely got to have some doctoring in here. Some… interesting doctoring. Maybe he could also like poking around in cadavers, but they’re just so Hard to obtain ethically… 

personality:

Friendly and optimistic, Auscul is the definition of deceit. He is the friendliest, most open person in the room all the time. He will interact with everyone and talk to people who feel down. He may not always have the best solutions, but he always tries and willalways act as someone to lean on. People who know him will describe him as a charasmatic goof, a bit too obsessed with his sciences.

He hardly really gets close to anyone, as he never really cares to make deep connections. Someone would have to be extremely stand-out to really capture his interest for that long of a time, in order for them to get to know him. He seems to have a cage around his true self, as if he has intentionally isolated himself from the rest of the world. He only gets close to those he sees fit, to those who can offer him something, or those he is obligated to. He is, however, constantly putting up a front. Even is he never connects with anyone, he will act overly friendly anyways. He is acutely aware of every move he makes, always projecting him in a way to make himself seem nonthreatening. He lures people in, makes them do anything he wishes or does anything he wishes. He is a manipulator and never regrets his actions. He is doing it all for science, of course!

He is way into experimentation. Like, he enjoys testing things out on other trolls and aliens just to see the resuts. He will dismiss any judgement of his personality or motives easily, not actually caring about what anyone thinks. He is chaotic neutral more than anything. He stays on the side that he finds the most interesting.

He is also partially blind. He was born almost completely blind, making him a target from an early age. He took out his own eyes when he was capable and invented his glasses, which gives him the ability to see his environment. It’s all green-tinted, though, so he never knows anyone’s blood color or anything.

also hes trans, just to mention that i guess 

Okay I love all of this, and I love the whole him pretending to be nice and putting up a front thing, so I dooo want to push it a little more. Maybe he could be someone who offers to help the ill, like in those Arsenic Poisoning stories. He’s the good doctor, goofy and friendly, and he lures people in under the promise of taking care of them, because of course he’d take such GOOD care of them, he’s so charismatic and nice. And then he just selectively takes some of them to experiment on, poison to death, and then feed to his lusus. You didn’t tell me what his blood color is, but I’m assuming Jade, so I think that’s an interesting take on/distortion of the stereotypical jadeblood caretaker role, too!

dream planet: PROSPIT

Title: MAGE OF RAGE. Because of this, he is Very Hard to kill. Like, you can stab him a bunch and he’ll just keep coming back. He’s brutal. 

He also does actively understand the ways in which he can break down and destroy… And he does passively change people’s options…….. by killing them. 

Design: 

Face: I made the bridge of the glasses a bit thicker just to try to balance the large size of the brims. I also added black lips. Male jadebloods have the pronounced black lips, too, from what we’ve seen in canon so far. 

Outfit: It was just Jake English’s outfit, so I decided to give it a bit of additional flair. I took inspiration from old victorian doctor outfits and gave him coattails and a cravat, as well as beefing up the bow a little more. I took the cleats off the shoes, since he has no reason to need cleated shoes. I added some buttons and details to his shorts. As for the symbol, I added a little bit of the pretzel influence from Viricorn!

you guys are super good at what you do, thanks for all the help so far! 

Thank you for sharing all your lovely trolls! We’re glad to help! ^_^

-CD

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@47098

I hope you don’t mind how long this is!! I’ve been working on her for a long time!

Don’t worry, we always appreciate well developed trolls!

The left is before the game and during the beginning phases, the right is after some self-reflection.

Alternia or Beforus or some type of AU?: Alternia

Name: MAROUX RAURBE

Maroux- Partially from Marcel Marceau, a famous mime. the -oux is from another famous mime, Etienne Decroux.

Raurbe- I don’t exactly remember, I think it was from another famous Mime? I’m not too fond of this last name tbh

Oh I have a friend who absolutely loves mimes, he’d be very excited about this character. I love her a lot! I think pantomime performance in general is a good place to seek names for her… So I think I’m going to replace Raurbe with Pierot. The Pierrot is sort of the origin of the sad clown and was originally regarded as a fool, and typically played a servile background role, but evenutally developed into an everyman image fondly regarded by post-revolutionary people and misunderstood artists. I think it sort of echoes Maroux’s role enough to be an effective surname. 

Maroux Pierot. 

Age: 6.9 sweeps

Weapon, since I don’t use specibi: Jack in the box weaponry, where she pulls out a jack in the box and when it unwinds a random weapon or joke pops out. These can range from anything as useful as a gun or sword, or as useless as a bag of confetti.

That is SO cute and definitely applicable within canon. I hope all the weapons get fun punny names, like if a staff comes out calling it The SlapStick.

Inventory: CIRCUS, where there is a constantly spinning wheel that her items are spinning on. She has to wait for the rotation to reveal the item she wants. It also displays her joviality, whereas most inventory systems in my story show health (like HP).

Maybe you could add a Wheel of Death element to this. Place each item on a target and she has to use a knife to hit the target without damaging the item if she wants to extract it.

Blood color: Purple (she isn’t a mutant or anything, her color scheme is just bright. shes meant to stand out but maybe she stands out a bit too much??)

To keep her canon compliant I’ll have to bring her blood color down, but don’t worry, I’ll make sure she still pops! 

Symbol and meaning: Her symbol is in the shape of a smile, almost. The loop in the center is supposed to be sort of reminiscent of her tricky nature, while the two lines on the side show her silence. I sort of came up with it on the spot, though.

A really cute symbol, but with regards to our newer rule I’m going to go ahead and replace it with. 

Capripia. It has a nice similarly loopy design and it represents the dream planet and class assignment that you gave her- which I totally agree with! The symbol’s name is ‘the Brusque,’ which fits her actions more than her speaking habits (since her speaking habits are None).

Trolltag: silentComedian [SC]

I think corporealComedian [CC] communicates what you’re going for in a much subtler way. Corporeal Pantomime was a sculptural pantomiming artform that focused a Lot of attention on the art and evocation of emotion through gesture. Like Advanced Miming. It fits in well with her general theme and interests.

Quirk:

OuO? UnU hEhEhE!!! DuD (At first she only giggles or uses emoticons. Later on she speaks more. She capitalized Es and uses rhyme.)

Adorable quirk and very fitting for a mime character. I like the capitalized E because it feels like it provides a good creepy emphasis on that laugh.

Lusus: A dove, unnamed because it died extremely early in her life. A dove… hm. I can see why you’d pick that. But purples have a tendency towards aquatic mammal lusii, at least from what we’ve seen so far. I don’t think it’s impossible for the dove, so you can keep it if you want- especially because they’re associated with magical acts and all! But I might recommend a Hooded Seal. If only because their inflating nose is very clowny and very, very funny. 

Personality: She’s super sweet, always smiling. She is extremely creepy, coming off that way intentionally. She thinks that her creepy attitude mixed with her odd interests and persona makes her comedy better, which it sort of does.

Extremely curious, she will read almost anything put in front of her. She enjoys books about or involving comedy the most, but she won’t say no to a good mystery or romance if it happens to pass by. She secretly loves them, but don’t tell anyone! Her curiosity leads her to have some extremely odd and sometimes nonsensical pieces of information in her mind, most of which is inconsequential because she can’t recite them. This leads to her knowing how to do things that others don’t, though, and that only adds to others interpretation of her as a mysterious and off-putting figure.

She has a vow of silence due to her involvement in the religion of the Subjuggulators. She was never really given much of a choice about her decision, mostly because she was sort of… born into it? Her lusus was murdered very early on, and she was taken in by them to become a sort of charity case. Their violent tendencies rubbed off on her, though, so she is incredibly strong and versitile in battle. She was an active member, seeing them all as her family, and would kill anyone they wished. She was essentially the reaper among them, the silent mime made to do dirty work. She had doubts, mostly because she reads a lot and learns about the trolls her group is bigoted against, but never had the guts to leave them. She also has some inherently bigoted ideals, despite her research into the lower castes. Even as the trolls she murdered would beg for life, she would offer them no mercy.

She does change later, though! Especially before she goes god tier.

I ADORE her personality and the detail and thought you’ve put into it. Her being in a role where she feels she has to listen to the cult and is influenced by them despite her research, and how she has to learn to be better… very compelling and a lot of development potential! 

I do have to remind that purpleblooded trolls are known for being biologically predisposed to violent and unpredictable behavior, so you might want to scheme up a way to avoid such tendencies? Maybe her clowning around helps soothe her… Or maybe she just takes a good sopor nap.

Interests:

Clowning ?? BRIGHT COLORS ABSTRACT FORMS OF COMEDY THAT AREN’T NOTICEABLE UNTIL YOU LOOK CLOSE FUNNY DANCES squirt guns CLOWN IN THE BOXES (used as weaponry) ANIMALS

All so cute and good! Does she like interpretive dance, too? You should maybe give her a little interest in slapstick. But the whole abstract comedy thing is wonderful. 

Title: Knight of Light

Her being overwhelmed with information makes this a very fitting title imo. She needs to learn to exploit and utilize all the information she has in her mind and how to filter out the lies and unnecessary bits and get things down to a functional core. She’ll be very powerful once she reaches her potential! Her inverse is Rogue of Void, which means she can passively redistribute mystery and secrets, too! 

She is...an adorable clown KnightLight. That is all I came here to say thank you.

-TR

Land: MANSIONS and PURSUIT

Ooo, so a whole planet full of mansions? I wonder how that’ll work. Pursuit makes sense because her title implies a pursuit of truth and information… 

Dream Planet: Derse

Sorry that that was so long! The personality segment especially. She’s one of my favorite fantrolls, and I really want to do her justice;; 

Don’t apologize, you provided the perfect amount of information! I adore her! Now on to design stuff!

Hat/Horns: I loved the hat so much that I had to keep it around. I made it a darker purple stolen right from the pants and changed the outline, and then added a little stripe to add some extra visual interest. Her horns I changed to match the bend of her symbol, but also to fit perfectly inside her hat! 

Hair: On her mime side, I felt like she felt a little bare without visible bangs. I still kept them pretty sparse, but I put a few more peeking out. On the right, I just gave her a few more flippy bits to fill out the body of her hair. 

Eyebrows/Eyes: On the clown side, I liked the eyebrows really high because it looked silly and clowny, but I wanted to bring them down to a more reasonable height on the right. For the eyes, I wanted to add eyelashes to match the traditional girl troll rule. On the mime side, I also added a little mimey makeup!

Collar: I gave her ruffly collar an outline. 

Shirt: Changed the symbol on both sides to reflect her new symbol! 

Skirt: I wanted to give her mime side a mimey kind of overalls with gold snaps and some light stripes. Cute and fun. 

Pants: I kept them the same on the right side to keep that pop of light color that she really needs, but on the mime side I recolored them to be blood colored with light spots. 

Thank you so much for sharing her. She’s so cute and I love her to death! 

-CD

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@47098

Hi again! You guys helped me a lot with my trolls, and you helped me a bit with her already, but if it’s alright I’d like another review! 

Name: Cris Wright 

Is this a reference to Phoenix Wright or do you just like the name? Hehe. I would almost recommend changing the surname to Binyot as a reference to Vinny Vinesauce, a really famous game corrupter, but… since I don’t know your reasoning behind this name, and human kid names tend to have less rhyme and reason, I will Approve It.

Age: 14 (or the equivalent of about 6.9 sweeps)

Weapon: Grappling hook!

As cool as that is, I think maybe hammerkind or scrapkind would work best for her, as a reference to her interests? It seems a lot more likely that she’d be carrying around her bangin’ hammer, or a piece of sharp scrap that she could kick ass with. Unless she utilized the grappling hook to get away from the beast in her home? But it doesn’t sound very useful to use a grappling hook inside a house… I guess I’d need more context LOL.

Inventory: Looks like an old point and click adventure game’s inventory system? Also it keeps track of her health. It has the possibility of getting ‘corrupted,’ but I’m not sure how it would get corrupted.

Since she’s a heart player, maybe it could get corrupted by giving her Way More Lives. Just hearts going all off the screen. Especially if she gets god-tiered in a really unorthodox way that could result in glitching. 

Symbol: Missingno’s ghost version, colored green to match her glasses/ eyes! It matches both her love for video games and is sort of similar to how the events of her story play out. Thank you guys for the suggestion, back when!

Oh I’m glad it was helpful! 

Handle: screapmetalMaster [SM] - screapmetal is for her scrap metal sculptures and her inability to type well. Master is because of her false confidence and bravado. 

Quirk: types in all lowervase and often makes extremely easy to fix typos because she types extremely fast and doesnt check her spelling before pressing send and makes herself look like a complete dumbasss 

FUCK i mean lowercase, also dumbass should ujust have like two s

JUST FUCK 

(uses capitals to emphasize words, mostly curse words, and corrects herself using said curse words. Often makes typos in the correction as well. Doesn’t use commas or apostrophes,  most of the time, and doesn’t capitalize names.)

Haha I love that, it’s a really simple and effective way to communicate her tendency towards haste. I think it makes sense that she’d be in a rush for a lot of reasons, not the least of which including her… lusus.

Lusus: Keeping this in because she sort of… does have one? A big beast in her home that chases her around that acted a bit like a parent when she was a very small baby. The beast is a creature beyond description. When she turned three, the monster kept away before eventually emerging to begin chasing. 

Now I gotta ask… what kind of beast is it? Like you say it’s beyond description, so is it a first guardian or some chaotic sort? Or a spirit? Some sort of cosmic reach around monster projected by a juggalo? Weird stuff can happen in Homestuck so I’d not be too surprised by any of these options. 

Personality: 

Excitable, self-loathing.

Extremely excitable, as in she gets EXTREMELY EXCITED over things she is interested in. She hates sitting still, preferring to wander around aimlessly even if she has seen everything before. She has a hard time connecting to people, but if she does she will ride or die with them. She has a hard time believing anyone really likes her, but still tires her best to be what she considers likable. She doesn’t know what other people are like, though, so she often isn’t very good at making impressions. Every mistake is just another reason to hate herself, but she never lets other people know how she really feels about herself. She absolutely has a phobia of talking about herself, just the thought making her panic. She perceives everyone as being better than her, viewing herself as some kind of cosmic fuck-up that was shoved into the farthest corner of the galaxy to be forgotten.

She is very earnest, seeking ways to do things and enjoying problem solving, but when social interaction comes into play she is completely blank. She has never been around people, so this is to be expected, but it is still almost impossible to speak to others in real life. She has a bigger problem speaking to other humans, as trolls are easier for her to talk to because she relates more to them. 

She has a phobia of being touched, but finds that she is okay when she initiates the touch. 

Ooh, I do like this personality a lot… Being unable to sit still because of how she grew up and this feeling of suffering and this desire for closeness… An inability to connect emotionally and a search for a sense of self, a need to look inside and figure herself out… I also adore that her theme color is green, because it feels like a nice nod to the doom aspect, which feels pretty connected to her too. 

I think you should focus a little more on her desire to build a cohesive identity. You mention her outward confidence/calling herself a master, so maybe make her someone who is a bit of a compulsive liar. Who tries to overstate who she is and what she is capable of, because that’s what she thinks people want to hear, and she wants to present this cohesive outward identity to try to find a sort of stability within herself. 

Interests:

Turning scrap metal into very scraggly, usually sharp sculptures. She basically puts a pile of scrap down and hits it with a hammer. 

Video games, or more specifically fucking up the game’s coding to make weird things happen. 

Programming (In a broad sense)

“in a broad sense” made me laugh. My favorite thing people do is organizing game menu items in a particular code sequence to make events happen in speedruns. Would she do that sort of thing? 

Adventure (in a “i want to see everything and mess it up!” way instead of an “i want to explore the world!” kind of way) 

Maybe you should have her have like, a youtube channel or something of the short where she shows off her glitch fun to try to give herself an ego boost. 

Title: Mage (??) of Heart 

I’m… tempted to make her a Knight of Heart. I know Maroux is a knight, but Maroux’s a troll and Cris is a human, so that should be fine yeah? It just seems like she has a lot of need to self-focus and work on who she is and learn to be confident in herself and her abilities and her identity.

Land: CORRIDORS and SCRAP 

Essentially leaving what she used to have and being thrown back into it, like the universe is telling her that she can never leave what she was born into. (if that makes sense)

Oh that’d be so stressful for her but you’re very right about it being a good idea. It would create a quest that forces her to work on self reflection and exploration instead of an examination of the world around her.

Dream Planet: Derse 

For sure fitting!

thank you guys again!

Always happy to help! Thank you for sharing another wonderful character. Here’s the design notes:

So I really didn’t have much to edit here. I moved her face down to match the style’s proportions better, including moving the hairline down. I made the jacket a uniform color to preserve simplicity. And I added shoes (edited from fan-troll’s) because I feel like if she needs to run it’s a good idea for her to have some reliable running shoes. Unless she wears socks because she needs to sneak? But even then working with a ton of sharp metal scrap while shoeless seems foolish.

She’s a great character! I hope this helps!

-CD

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what kind of personality would you think that a Hope player should have? or, what kind of traits do you think they all sort of have. from seeing the few hope players in canon im sort of confused how to go about writing one. im also confused as to how to write blood players, especially in consideration of their powers?

Hope players: The most important thing to think about in terms of hope players is Convictions. They have a sense of what is right and wrong. It’s not always what’s Universally Accepted as right and wrong, but it’s THEIR view and they are VERY serious about it. Eridan, for example, really wanted to kill lowbloods, really cared a lot about his own self-interest, really thought he deserved more. He was a jerk, but he was Convinced of his own code of justice. 

They also tend to focus a lot on fantasy. Jake was lost in his world of movies and action, Eridan developed his interest in and utilization of magic, and Cronus is implied to have done the same though he also has his whole uh. Humankin thing. 

They’re Targeted Optimists, which means they have a lot of faith in their ability to build THEIR ideal future. And they can be a little inflexible about their own ideals. 

They’re also not afraid of a little chaos if they think that’s what it takes to get things right. You have to remember that their inverse is rage and that means that they can sway to the Ragey side every once in a while, because that can underlie or drive their actions depending on where they are in their personal development. 

Blood players: They’re characters who either have a lot of bonds or need to Learn to have a lot of bonds. They’re the kind of character who is going to make a decision and run. They’re the Natural Leader, but that doesn’t mean everyone around them is a Natural Follower. They have to learn to adapt and work with a team and draw everyone into their web to become efficient and effective as a core of a team. 

As far as powers go, we sadly never got to see a god tier blood player in action! It’s my personal headcanon that they’d have earth powers, as a contrast to the breath player’s air powers- especially considering the ghost godtier karkats we saw were the only god tiers without wings. They can’t fly- they’re stuck on the ground. Which probably means they can do some majorly cool ground stuff!

-CD

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I have a very secretive character who is very good at hiding intentions and aspects of themself, who purposefully says wrong information about several things just to get the right response, and who can create 'illusions' that they say is magic. They are very quiet, and observe people more than anything. They are also rather keen on finding out things about the game. Do they seem like a light player? I was thinking they were a bard of light, but I just don't know.

Hmmm. I think bard of light definitely works well for this sort of thing. light and illusion are associated and destruction of light definitely deals w/ the obfuscation of the truth!

-CD

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@47098

im… back again,

i hope you dont mind reviewing another fankid! i made her recently and i just. UGH i really love her a lot? so i want her to be as good as she can be

I love reviewing your kids, so don’t worry about it! And she’s really cute. The worm theme is an interesting idea! 

She seems like a smart character with some morbid fascinations and stuff like that, so I want to try to push that a little bit!

Name: Lumi Mimizu

Lumi, sort of taken from the scientific name for worms.

Mimizu, the Japanese word for Earth worm/ worm. She is also of Japanese descent.

Age: 14

Weapon: Books. She throws them at stuff. The heavier the book, the better.

Hmmm. Bookkind is surprisingly common for fankids, so how about… bear with me here…

Worm on a string. Something that would be fundamentally useless at first, but I’m sure you could device a ton of different ways to alchemize a worm on a string. 

…Or you could do a fishing pole if you wanted something more practical!

Inventory: SHELFNEST. She stores her items on a shelf, it becomes physical when she tries to take things out. The more items, the taller the shelf will be. She has to climb up to get items, sometimes.

Symbol and meaning: A worm with glasses. It’s a bookworm.

It’s so cuteeee

Handle: inconspicuousXenomorph [IX]

She likes joking about tapeworms, and sometimes talks about how tapeworms are similar to xenomorphs.

I dunno how Inconspicuous this girl is, and xenomorph facehuggers DEFINITELY aren’t inconspicuous, so I might suggest… luridXenomorph. Lurid means bright, vivid, but also shocking, gruesome, and giving ‘too much information’.

Quirk: Talks pretty normally, you know, but uses a lot of commas and uhh… sorta tyes in a weird manner? Like, she’ll, um, use a lot of pauses and elipses. Just because, you know?

Also makes some typos, but doesn’t bother fixing them. She’s too lazy for that.

If she’s too lazy to fix typos, maybe do away with the caps at the beginning of sentences, too? And if she’s charismatic and confident, the pauses might not necessarily be necessary, though she can still use a lot of filler words! Maybe make her the kind of person to double (or quadruple, or octuple) text frequently.

Personality:

Extremely exciteable and charsmatic, Lumi is pretty much the backbone of her friendgroup. She is the one they come to when they feel like they need to talk, and she is always there to provide solid (if not occasionally nonsensical) advice. She has an extremely optimistic attitude, often joking about her own misfortune and constantly trying to cheer up the people around her. She will try and guide them to the answers they seek instead of outright telling them, partially because she likes to see them squirm to find the solution and partly because she knows the only way to learn a lesson is for them to figure it out by themself.

She makes a lot of… odd jokes. Mostly revolving around tapeworms, or situational comedy that might seem fucked up or out of nowhere. If there is a dead body, she will humorously postulate how she thinks it died. If someone falls, she will always get a giggle in before helping them. She will only apologize for it if the person is mad.

She enjoys meandering along, when trying to solve a riddle or puzzle. She has a pentient to even be lazy. But, in the end, she will usually find a way to her goal if she doesn’t deem it impossible. Once pass the goal, she will usually attribute the success of the mission to everyone but herself. Not because she doesn’t believe in herself or anything, she just knows that other people feel better when you tell them that they were the reason you won.

Lumi has a youtube channel where she reads books aloud and makes fun of them. She draws illustrations for the pictures and everything. She has a really big following.

This is a neat personality! I thiiink if you want her to be a void player, you’ve got to tie in just a little bit more of that void play constructivity and mystery here. Maybe she tends to be a little mysterious on purpose? Like, keeping some information about herself vague for literally no reason. 

Maybe she could like mystery stories a lot? Or create little mystery narratives that she leads her friends down for funsies. You could probably even make her DM for that effect? Just anything where she likes starting from a blank slate…

Maybe she could even have a bad habit of not finishing what she starts? Like she starts making a youtube series and then gets booored and moves onto something new, because she likes that Blank Canvas. That New Project sensation! 

Backstory/ stuff that i think is sorta important?:

She is the Alpha version of another character of mine, who will not be named here for Reaons. The other girl is not human, but the jist of it is: Beta girl is akin to a changeling, and is part of an alien specie that I’m adding to my story thing. Beta girl took the place of Lumi in the Beta timeline, and Lumi was killed in that timeline because of it. Lumi was parasitized, thus I figured it would be sort of ironic for her to have a fascination/ joke about tapeworms. The Beta girl is perfect, studious, and mild-mannered, so I made Lumi be sort of the opposite.

VERY interesting way of establishing this theme.

Interests:

Books READING Parasites/ making jokes bout parasites EARTHWORM JIM Obscure brands of food, mostly from other countries (usually stuff people think is gross. she eats it on cam to get people’s reactions) Drawing

You should definitely make her a gatherer of info that others find gross or creepy in general. Make her like mortuary science! You say she likely to speculate the way a corpse died, so make her know about that. Make her know how to estimate time of death, make her know about putrefaction. 

And have her interested in horror movies.She references xenomorphs? Make her like monster flicks! She loves a good alien scare! Maybe she’s a fan of The Thing, because someone mimicking someone’s body? Cooool. Make her like Invasion of the Body Snatchers. Oh, and Tremors, because BIG WORMS? Great! 

Maybe she could like worm games in general, like Worms: Armageddon. Because worms? Blowing each other up in increasingly convoluted ways? She’s here for it. 

And since she likes reading and stories, she could like books too. Especially creepypastas. That could be a lot of what she draws! Creepydrawstas are pretty popular on youtube, and she could make fun of all the shitty stupid ones. 

Title: ??? of Void

Edit: I FORGOT to do her title but I think Maid of Void would be a good fit for her! Someone who’s naturally mysterious and who likes to create that sort of mystery. 

She’d actively create nothingness, which is a weird concept, but it’s best understood by her passive inverse. Bard of Light. She obfuscates information intentionally, passively hiding it and tucking it under the rug in order to create an emptiness, a dearth of info!

Land: WIRES and (I was thinking about maybe a circus theme here, or perhaps a library theme? maybe even a computer theme, to show off how computer/ internet savvy she is?)

Hmmm, I definitely more associate wires and computer stuff with Doom, just because of the Systems And Hardwiring concept underlying it. For her, maybe… 

Land of Colonies and Tremors. The planet is covered in eusocial colonies of consorts, crowded into mysterious, spiralling towns dotting the rising plains of the planet’s hole-covered surface. They stay at high altitudes because closer to the planet’s surface, something is rumbling. Shaking the ground. She’s got to figure out what’s underneath. 

Dream Planet: Prospit

Design:

Glasses/jacket: I moved the colors back to black and white, since that’s usually what’s done when a character is first introduced. Extra colors are for later outfit additions and transmutations! 

Mouth: I really wasn’t vibing well with giving a Japanese character buckteeth, so I made it into a tongue! 

Symbol: I gave the worm some pupils because I thought it looked cute!

Shoes: They looked like sandals to me at first, but you didn’t sprite any toes, so I assumed they were meant to be close-toed. Thus, I added a more obvious toe part and also beefed up the strap to make it look more Like A Shoe Strap. 

Other than that there wasn’t much for me to change! She’s so cute and I love her. 

-CD