22, the fic "Bang"?
Edit a earlier fic into your current style. (Bang really?)
“Ye don’t seem that tou-” the sound of a shot rang cutting off his voice. He tried to go back to insult the intruder to find nothing but sparks. 53 frowned looking down at his chest to see a hole in his chest. It was slowly bleeding the green fluid.
“Sean!” He froze hearing a voice behind him. Slowly he turned now seeing the family he swore to protect. He tried to call out to them, make them turn away, anything. Yet only sparks buzzed from the hole in his chest.
“They seem important to you Norse.” The voice sneered. “How about we eliminate them.” 53 turned quickly to stop the attacker hearing more bangs from the man’s gun. He punched the man causing him to hit the ground the gun falling from his hand. 53 turned to see the figures now on the ground. He moved slowly to them opening his mouth trying to call his adopted sons names.
‘No! No, no, no!’ 53 mouthed frantically kneeling next to the bodies. Anti was bleeding from the chest the life slipping from his eyes. Next to him Chase had a hole right between the eyes already gone.
‘No no no’ he mouth once again as a final bang rang through the area and the lights in his eyes flickered off.
