#7outof7

[lenaohh22]

Nature day challenge number #7. The idea is to flood facebook with the beauty of nature. The challenge is - for 7 days post a nature themed photo. #nature #naturedaychallenge #대한민국 #red #autumn #mapletree #7outof7 (at 나미섬)

[lewissethipher-blog]

Jocelyn’s critique!

Overall: 9.75/10

Appeal: somewhere near the end, I began to lose interest, but I began to regain it as I got closer. This could actually be a cause of other things happening. 9.5/10

Content: All the information is there, and I didn’t notice anything missing. 10/10

Explanation: All of the given information was shown clearly. 10/10

Craftsmanship: All good except for one slightly confusing sentence (I don’t have the paper anymore but in the middle of the sentence it said something like “, more (something else),” (very helpful I know))  9.5/10