I won’t lie. Rereading “We’ll Meet Again” by George deValier after so many years was quite the experience. Particularly now that I’m older than George’s Arthur.
Out of the entire Veraverse, I still believe that “We’ll Meet Again” was George’s best.
It’s the story of a young and overly-optimistic American fighter pilot and a lonely, “know-better-than” British pub owner picking up the pieces of their lives in the wake of war and their loss of innocence.
War brings them together then wrests them apart, only for their love to bring them together again.
If I remember correctly, George’s portrayal of Alfred and Arthur in WMA was one of the reasons why my teenager-self started shipping them in the first place (in addition to General Kitty Girl and StarDropDream’s fics). There was also the Rockets comic by Hakuku and Ronbinrocks, but that story is for another time.
A single paragraph of George’s packs the action of a short novel. Their narration is dynamic, fast-paced and “jumpy.” George was so good at scattering seemingly unimportant details that later clicked and fell into place. Or how they orchestrated situations that enabled characters which belonged to different fics to meet and save each other. One of my favorite examples of this is Ludwig’s capture in chapter 5, which binds the plots of WMA and “Auf Wiedersehen Sweetheart” together.
There are some lines in WMA that I will never forget, like:
(1) “Hey, Arthur. If we’re dreaming… let’s not wake up.”
(2) “I was in a good mood that night. I’d just fallen in love.”
(3) “I like that,” said Alfred, staring at Arthur.
“What?” asked Arthur huffily. How bloody irritating that he could not even control his facial expressions around the American. “When you smile.”
The friendship between Alfred and Francis is so heartwarming to read every time. The scene where they race in their wheelchairs in the hospital ward never fails to make me smile.
Also, the innuendos at the beginning of the third chapter…George definitely knew what they were doing!
I wouldn’t say that the rest of the Veraverse fics made an impression on me, but I do wish they’d have finished writing “Lily of the Lamplight” at least. The first chapter sounded so promising.
And with this I promise I finish — something that I’ve noticed during my extensive time in the fandom is that most people can write Alfred fairly well from the start.
Yes, some fan writers only scratch the surface and limit his character to this boisterous young man with a hero complex, but I think most of them do a fairly good job.
I like to call him the trial and error character. He’s enjoyable and less intimidating to write.