My Former Light (can you get cheesier? cuz i dont think so)
So I was rereading my old half-written fanstuff. Most of them I want to rewrite so that they wont be so awful anymore and if not they are not finished.
The thing is, it's poetry (le gasp) and the feels there are not in character and two lines I cant throw away are the worst and I am very hesitant and shy about posting it
(because someone will read them - i have two readers, how awesome is that? you guys are best, thank you)
I will post it. right now. right here.
So it's past aokuro-ish, it's poetry and awful.
but its the first time im posting something like that so
please tell me what you think about it.
also how do you hide things under cut
Hello, my light. Long time no see. How have you been?
Ah, well? I’m glad to know that. Bye. Take care.
What? No, it doesn’t matter even if you win.
I won’t come back. Well, now you are aware.
Why yes, I’m angry. What did you expect?
That I’ll return at once if you decide you want it?
Nope, sorry, love, it doesn’t work like that.
For far too long by this I have been haunted.
Oh please, you’ve seen the signs. And if you haven’t,
It shows once more just how messed up we were.
You say you didn’t notice? That’s alright.
You see, I think I’ve evened up the score.
And I don’t need you anymore, my light.
Please, leave it. Yes, you may be slightly sore,
But you will heal – I managed, after all.
And I was left completely in the dark.
It seemed that I was trapped between four walls,
Where sun won’t send one tiny little spark.
You say you’re sorry? Wow, it is progression.
A pity that it came a little late.
Say, can I ask a tiny selfish question?
For you, my former light, who’s oh-so-great…
How does it feel to live without shadow?