Analysis Reflection
After I came up with the topic of comparing and contrasting the show How I Met Your Mother (HIMYM) and the show Friends, I immediately came up with an outline of topics that I wanted to talk about. That outline helped me organize my thoughts and figure out what my introduction and conclusion were going to be. I had a total of two drafts, my rough draft and then my final draft. What helps me the most when I’m editing my paper for my final draft, is by editing bits and pieces through the week and even through the day. I feel less stressed by doing that. The hardest part for me in every paper I write, is to come up with my introduction paragraph and even my thesis statement. I tend to come up with my thesis statement at the very end of my paper, because it’s always getting changed. Like I said, coming up with an outline for my rough drat and editing my paper throughout the day/week helped me get further along with my writing process. Workshop always helps, even if I don’t want to hear the criticism that my group members have to say to me. I guess the only concern I have is that I would like to be with group members that I have never been with. It’s nice to be able to read different papers and see the different writing patterns that occur with every writer. I only received feedback from one of my group members and she told me that I basically missed out on the “analysis” part to the essay. John had said the same thing. Although, at the time I thought it was okay to just compare the two shows, but after talking to both my group member and John, I realized that I needed to add more analysis to my paper. Basically, I needed to figure out the “so what” to my paper and also talk about some of the differences between the two shows. Once I had the better understanding of what my paper was lacking, I figured it wouldn’t be too terribly bad to revise my paper. I was somewhat wrong, because it took me a couple hours to figure out exactly what John wanted from me. I am hoping I revised my paper well enough and that my analysis of the two shows make my paper even stronger. What surprised me the most was that I dug deeper into the two shows and got the hang of analyzing better than I thought I would have. If I knew what analyzing meant in the first place and how to exactly incorporate it into my topic, then my writing process would have flowed right along and I don’t think I would have much to revise. If I could go back in time and change that, I would have gone straight to John and told him about my topic and made sure that I would be doing the analysis part correctly.














