I really love the "I watched you all eat me alive." Line in your spiritmatsu fic!! The entire fic is honestly a really good display of how these thoughts take hold and, though a little rushed imo is also a good rep of how it would happen if it were the fault of a spirit. Long in short would it b k if I derived that line for a fic of my own inspired by yours? may or may not publish
Yeah no I definitely know what you mean about it being a little rushed. There was a lot more I wanted to get down before hitting the climax, but I couldn’t get it out so I wound up with what we see. umu
Ahhh I’m glad you like the line though! I’m pretty fond of it too, it felt good to write it down. One of those moments where you just sit back and think, “That’s exactly where that needed to be. That’s exactly the way I wanted to communicate that feeling.”
Aw man, that sounds super cool!! It feels really uplifting that just one line has hooked into your mind so deeply. Yes, of course you can use/adjust/revamp/take inspiration from the line!! I’ve had a handful of times where a single line or piece of dialogue has revved up my engines.
Let me know if you publish it!! I’d love to read <3