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[unpaidsadisticintern]

Alux Rewrite - First Scene

The First Light

Original written story:

The stars winked and wispered in the night sky. Shining down with the moonlight pouring over the cut stone of paths and fountains in the garden. An Angel sits in the middle of a ring of white carnations. A light calls to her in the castle. Calling her name with crys and whines. It's Him again. Somehow, like He promised to her, He's here. The Angel seeps out of her statue and wakes up. The garden was quiet. She hadn't been awake for a while. But she could still see her friend across from her, like she always had. She doesn't want to go alone to meet Him. Carefully, she steps around the ring of flowers surrounding her and walks to the other statue. Still, she holds her blade and wears her armor. Even after almost 2,000 years, with no battel to fight in. The young angel goes up to her and pleads her to wake up, wispering

"Eleanor..."

And pulling on the other angels dress to bring her out of the statue.

"Eleanor!" She whispers again. Until the Angel appears and calls her name.

"Maria?"

"We have to go.."

Maria leads on, making her way to the main castle. Eleanor is just behind her, pleading.

"Go where? Why?"

"To meet Him."

They both knew who he was, but now? At this hour? Surely there's a better time. Eleanor thought so.

"Why now? It's late... We could get caught..."

Still Maria doesn't listen. Continuing along the stairs to the hallway, portraits and paintings of nobles, religious iconography, and landscapes on the wall trailing behind her, and she stops for a moment when she passes a Portrait of a Saint. She admires the painting of the woman. A young woman beautiful and peacful. Her name was Irene. The closest Saint to the Guardian.

Maria turns to Eleanor and says somberly,

"I miss her."

"... I do to..."

The moment was tender and full of mourning, but a baby's cry breaks them out of the moment. Maria rushes to the room, peaking over the heavy door of the nursery. They find the young prince in his crib crying for food and warmth. The young angel looks over the crib and admires the prince. She picks him up and holds him in her arms, but Eleanor urges her to put him down.

"He's just a baby, let him sleep."

"But he was crying! He's cold and hungry!"

"We shouldn't be here, Maria."

"But...he looks just like Him.."

The other angel sighs and takes the baby from her arms. "... He's a baby, Maria, he doesn't look like anything. "

"But just look at his eyes! He's there."

The baby's eyes were already green, unlike all the other babies in cozen whose are blue until a few months. She puts him back in his crib, and he starts to cry again. Something over him that he couldn't comprehend, but knew was there, and could only cry out for his mother. Footsteps are heard outside the chamber door,

"Did you hear that?

"Hear what?"

and they freeze for a second when the queen walks in.

They take flight and wiz past her through the castle and back to their statues. The queen looks back in confusion and slight horror. She clutches her amulet around her neck as she enters her son's room to tend to him. She sets her candel down and picks him up, rocking him back and forth to calm him down. The amulet glows and shines in his eyes. She looks at the doorway, worried and expecting. Waiting for the angels to appear again. They don't. She looks down again to see her son has stopped crying.

"Oh Alux, how am I going to protect you?"

Cover :

Authors note:

OKAY. what the fuck am I doing?

Well. Ive started making ar rewrite!!!! Real!!!.

Now, obviously, completion of it is not guaranteed. A lot of things I want to do are not guaranteed. I want to try and follow the model this post sets up, with an animatic, the original writing I have, and a drawing for it, but obviously the animatics will probably be the thing that might kill it. If so, I'll probably just do a comic as a substitution. But anyways. I'm essentially making a little goodie basket for every plot important moment and scene of the story I want to make. I've decided to make ar rewrite very much mixed media (There's only so much I can do in one form.) So that I don't overwhelm myself in the making. (AND OFCOURES ELAN HAS TO ANNOUNCE HES MAKING ANOTHWE MINECRAFT SERIES SO IM GONNA GET DERAILED Anyways.)

This is the first "Scene"! Like in a full episode this is what you would see first. So technically this is just the beginning of episode one. (Idk how many episodes there are going to be in total. Lol. Still working on that.)

Anyways that's all for the authors note. If you have questions, theories, or just want to talk about ar rewrite. Come ask me! Or @carvedrobin

[unpaidsadisticintern]

Back at it again with the AR rewrite questions, do we finally get info on Alux's mom this time? Does she get more than a minute 15 of screentime. Please she needs this. Oh and whatever's up with Elric I'm also interested in,I guess.

(also,do you guys have a name for her? If not and you want to,you can use what I've been calling her! I mean yeah Gemma is a little on the nose but--)

((I dunno if you can tag in asks but @carvedrobin is free to yap about this as well :> ))

@carvedrobin

Although I don't know if he'll say much. I've been the one who has mostly written for Aluxs character and surrounding family members.

I like the name you have for her, but I'd go with Gianna. (Meaning God is Gracious) to emphasize her roots to the Guardian. (The Guardian is essentially the God of her religion. And she's a descendant from him.)

She does get more time instead of just one flashback, but she still has to haunt the narrative for Alux in s1 and later s3. So you'd seen her in more contextual flashbacks to establish backstory and in mentions of her name, her presence, and in memories.

What you can know is that Gianna had to give up herself (her soul) in order for Alux to live. The Guardian has been looking for a new host to continue his ruling after the great battle, and he'd prefer it to be some close in his lineage. Alux might not have made it if it weren't for his mother and her sacrifice.

Gianna and Elrics' marriage was a sweet one until Alux was born. Elric was never exactly the religious type, and in Aluxs childhood Gianna started to pray over 5 times a day, pleading and begging. Elric didn't understand what was going in with his wife until he found her in her room.

After Gianna's death, Elric couldn't even bear to think about her. And Alux (young as he was) didn't know about anything, thinking she just ran away because she was unhappy.

When Alux is older he still believes this (until he learns later), and is obviously bitter at his dad for never talking about Gianna after that point.