SEND ME YOUR URL AND I’LL TELL YOU || 6/10 || @arvious
CHARACTER IN GENERAL: Crowe my queen. I wish we could’ve seen a lot more of her. Her death is a salt mine for me because it was off-screen and what the fuckery, that could have been handled better. Also imagine her in-gaaaaaaame. HOW THEY PLAY THEM: One of the most in-depth (if not THE most) renditions of Crowe Altius I have ever seen. Great job, tbh.THE MUN: SUE. mAY WE CO N TI N U E murderING each OTH e R w FEELS yO
RP WITH THEM: yesWANT TO RP WITH THEM: yes ;w;
OVERALL OPINION: Before everything else let me tell you I am NOT a poetic person. Back in my college days I avoided poetry subjects because I get confused with all the flowery words and convoluted images and metaphors, and training in law school to be precise in writing just made me more averse. Sue, you write greatly, and because you have your unique way with words, I am very happy to be able to write with and for you. When I think of Crowe, I remember your Crowe, and that your writing style forces me to adapt to a style that I have always been averse to. In a way you’re helping me too, and for that, thank you.
Although my one point is this - despite the fact that you utilize purple prose in your writing, yours isn’t as convoluted as many others out there. However, it DOES make me still have a difficult time untangling and deciphering some images you include in your responses, or even deciphering what it is exactly Crowe is doing - is she thinking? If she is thinking, does it show on her face? What DOES show and does not? Because there are too many (not always, I assure you) images included in one reply with the use of too many words, I somehow still end up getting lost and confused in your work. That and the formatting as well could be just a bit overwhelming - your partner may end up getting distracted greatly from your reply’s point if they have two big distractors in font of them - your words, or the formatting.
I feel though that this is just my training in writing making it difficult for me. I hope this would help you even in a small way. ;w;
**Note: Mun’s answer are all to be completely honest. Don’t send url if you don’t want brutal honesty