Arlito Reptil
@astralic-space-nerd
World: Alternia
Name: Arlito Reptil, named after reptiles
I…can see how the last name is but I don’t know that I see the connection to the first name? Also Reptil is a little on-the-nose. If you wanted something that was still basically “Reptile Reptile” maybe go with “Urenti Repeto” from Laurenti (surname of the guide who auctored the category of reptile) and herpetology (study of amphibians and reptiles?) Age: 6.5 sweeps
Theme/Story: She’s going through a hard time, her best friend got culled going to a party. She takes responsibility for it.
Review Goals: I dont know, I just want to know if they are Valid
Mmmmm I am going to say off the bat that this profile is difficult to review because of lack of justification for details? I see that you have a reptile-themes troll in name, but I don’t see that reflected as a throughline in the rest of the profile. I can offer suggestions for sure but I’d love to hear back from you about why you made some of these choices!
Strife Specibus: Macekind
So this, for example. I am not sure what a mace has to do with your character’s theme, and I wish you’d included an explanation for why you picked it! But I like the idea that “mace” here means like…pepper spray, since specialized reptile mace is a thing because reptiles are naturally kind of resistant to normal pepper spray.
Fetch Modus: Flower Modus (Works by the “loves me loves me not” system)
I don’t know that I understand. Is she playing “loves me loves me not” with a flower with a different captcha card on each “petal” until she reaches whichever one is left? What happens to the remaining captcha cards do they repopulate in a new flower? Does the invocation of “loves me”/“loves me not” have an impact on the item she retrieves?
If you wanna continue with a reptile theme, why not a SNAKE MODUS, where her captcha cards are split into pieces depending on the value of the item, and she has to play snake to collect the pieces and make a whole item? Blood Color: Violet
Lunar Sway: Prospit
Title: Seer of Light Symbol and Meaning: Aquapio
I can’t give you feedback on anything above because I don’t know why you picked those attributes!
Handle: chasingGalactic
I kinda like this one bc it sorta reminds me of A’Tuin, which is indeed reptile themed! Quirk: Doubless Ss Mm annd Nn, enndss all mmessssagess with :3 Special Abilities: None Lusus/Guardian: A giant Sea Snake\
Ooooh if you want something a little different maybe a Galapagos iguana since those are also seadwellers? Interests: She has a variaty of interests such as art, music, Minecraft, gaming, studying, reading, supporting lowblood rights
Personality: Friendly, cheerful and overall pleasant. She likes to be in the know about everything though, which can be taken as controlling Land: Land of Paint and Sea (Lopas)
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Maaaaan I *hope* you come back and tell me a little more about this character. I’m so intrigued by the fact that they have a Signless necklace. That’s a cullable offense! I want to know more about what drives them and what kind of story you envision for this character. But in the meantime, I hope my few suggestions helped!
-TR