2. What’s the most undeveloped section (beginning, middle, end?)
The end I guess. And how all the parts actually lead into each other
Already answered this! Another of my favourite characters tho is Jason
7. Write/post your favorite scene. Right here. Right now.
hmmm favourite scene... Do I have a favourite scene? Actually I do have a thing written up from a while back but it’s really far on in the story and has huuuuuuuge spoilers. hmmm... ok Imma post a slightly censored version (since honestly by the time we get that far half of this will have been changed anyway) here we go:
This hadn’t gone at all as expected. Well, obviously no one really expects to get kidnapped by an elusive terrorist group, stabbed by a psychotic teenager, and have their private memories rummaged through by a high school teacher, but for Elliot it hadn’t really been unexpected either.
The unexpected part was that after all the kidnapping, stabbing and mind reading, they wanted him to join them.
The people-stabber leaned relaxed against the wall, black hair falling into his smiling face. The scarred healer on guard duty tried to feign disinterest, but the way she leaned closer round the edge of the entrance showed that she was eager to hear what he had to say.
Elliot looked at the two of them, wondering if they were really serious. Finally he responded.
“Are you insane? Wait, you kill people for fun, of course you’re insane, let me rephrase that. Are you stupid? What could possibly make you think I want to help wipe out an entire race?”
The black haired boy scoffed. “They [SPOILERS SPOILERS] You know what it’s like [MORE SPOILERS]. We’ll never be accepted at the snail’s pace this city calls progress.”
“Right, and murdering humans left and right is definitely going to convince them they don’t need to slaughter us. Great logic. Look, I might not exactly be a great person, but I’m nothing like you. Now shut up go kick some puppies or something.”
*vaguely wonders if more of those spoilers should have been censored*
(I originally wrote this for a writing prompt on Go Teen Writers earlier this year - you can see me desperately working around the fact that I haven’t named any of the characters in this scene besides Elliot. some of this isn’t even aligned with how this scene is currently planned in canon due to the nature of the prompt)