Overdue Returns (mimzomworld story)
library!! kxi^anuxa nālam!! titles are hard and I’m going to quit fiddling with it
contains: library visit, minor eldrich horror (size of whale), removing traps, aftermath of the raid on Whisperstep’s home, grief/mourning
Conlang Pronouns: itex/itexirr/itexun, kī/ksirr/kīxun. Conlang translations under the cut.
•••
Nat sighs. She’s been putting this off too long already.
“Fox, we’re going to the library. I need to give these books back,” she says, adding the book about animals they really like to the pile.
“Wolf book?” They tip their head. “Library zose kxi^anuxa nālam, mo?”
When she doesn’t answer, they reach for the book and hold it up. “Nālam,” they repeat, tapping the book. “Not yours?”
She takes a cookbook from the kitchen, and shows them the difference between a library book and her own books. Does not let them peel off the sticker with their blunted claws. “I know you can’t read yet, but there’s fish books at the library—”
Chirp-chirp-chirping, they tug her in the direction of the car.
Ding! The bell on the desk is within reach. Ding-ding-di—!
She scoops them up, holding them out of range of the bell. Making a grumbling sound, they stretch their hands at the bell, think for a minute, then reach with their foot.
The bell is out of range of their foot. She should get them another pair of boots, in case these aren’t warm enough for winter.
Ding! He sighs. Fox is a mimic, they can just mimic the bell.
Setting them back down, he pushes the bell away slightly. “We’re looking for books about—”
“Fish book.” Looking up at the librarian, they smile, showing all the sharp teeth in their very wide mouth. “Fish book please?”
The librarian—Cathy—nods, and makes the mistake of asking Fox what they want to know about fish. Hearing the word, they tip their head, chattering in their own language.
Nat recognises some of the words, by now, but they fly past too quickly for him to translate. “They like documentaries, so something with realistic pictures, maybe?”
So they look at some books that are for older kids who want to know everything and not probably-five-year-olds who can’t read yet, but that’s fine. They mostly care about the pictures, and she’ll be reading them out loud anyway.
Dead fish are fine, but one of them has a picture of a whale next to a diver, showing how big they are, and Fox hisses at it. Hides behind her, leaving the book on the floor. “Big fish eats us?”
“No,” he says, “whales don’t eat us. They eat many many small things, like….” He’s talked to them about bugs. “Like bugs, but very tiny fish-bugs.”
“No more whales,” they mumble, finding a book about birds. And another one about reptiles. “Whales tomorrow or very later.”
They check the books out, and Fox imitates the barcode scanner while they walk back to the car. And then birds.
So many birds, which apparently means exploring the woods when they get home. And carrying them on his shoulders while he gets rid of all the traps they find. Some traps, he’s aware of, but he didn’t always own this house, and—
SNAP!
His sacrificial stick is bitten by rusty metal teeth. Just to be safe, he taps out the area around that trap. “Okay, we’re putting that in the cart.”
“Krrakata zoxtok,” they mumble. “Zose ilutat ksateke.”
“Yeah, I don’t like it either.”
They howl, and get a response. It’s close. Unsettlingly close, but he listens when they point him in the direction of the sound.
“Miwa!”
Tonuako^itayanek stands. Kī stands, despite ksirr messed-up leg, using ksirr spear to keep the weight off. Yes, kī could’ve gone to the ewanuxa at Moon Lake—not everyone can make the trip between the summer and winter ewanuxa^ese, and there’s always some people who stay and take care of them—but kī didn’t.
Tonuako^itakanek counted. Put the fires out, made sure the humans were killed dead, and counted. Four pups hidden in the big pots in the pantry-house, and six in the cupboards. Five frozen under blankets. Two clinging to the apprentice of a blood-covered healer who snapped at kī, and a couple others.
They had to bury their dead and gather what they could, and kī had to count again.
Ksirr pup wasn’t one of the dead. Lelasenaka^ataxa was, but not their pup. Kī stayed, when the other survivors left, because Lelaxotayanetek was missing, and kī was not going to abandon itex.
And now, and now, ksirr pup is sitting on a human’s shoulders. Wearing clothing kī doesn’t recognise.
“Mo zose kekone takrraxit?”
“Ksa.”
Itex climbs down, running to kī. Lets kī look at itex, combing through soft hair Lelaxotayanetek would never brush if it was up to itex.
When itex bumps into ksirr injured leg, kī hisses. Gets stared at with wide eyes as itex says something kī doesn’t understand.
Squeaks, when ksirr reaction to the human’s approach is to hold itex tightly and growl.
“What’s that?”
Lelaxotayanetek takes advantage of ksirr shock to pry itexun free. “What’s wrong,” itex grumbles.
And then says something to… Nat. Which ends in kī being picked up and carried while itex brings ksirr spear instead of the little cart full of—
“We’re hunting them, miwa. So I can chase birds without getting hurt!”
“What?”
Nat sets xem down on the couch, carefully. Lets Fox—lets Lelaxotayanetek handle introductions while xe hisses at him and he removes his mangled coat.
Xyr name is Tonuako^itayanek, and xe’s their miwa. And he is apparently their kiwa, which is something xe doesn’t take very well.
“What does that mean?” he asks. They tip their head. “Mo kiwa?” he tries.
Echoes of narrators talking about parents and parenting. Wolves and birds and bears and—
“Oh,” he says. “I don’t think your miwa wants to share you with me.”
Rebellious chirping. His hand and xyr hand are pressed together, and xe’s clearly uncomfortable with this but they don’t let either of them pull away. “Okay, okay.” Very gently, he squeezes xyr hand, and lets go.
Xe’s injured. Xyr leg is the worst of it, since xe’s clearly been walking and all that’s done is make it— Nat doesn’t pin xem down when xe struggles.
Right now, xe needs to feel safe. So he takes a step back, gives xem space, and goes to get xem something to eat.
“Miwa,” Lelaxotayanetek says, quietly. “Mo mewa? Mo Lelasenaka^ataxa?”
Xe squeezes their hand. “Mext xa. Lelasenaka^ataxa zose onauzi.”
•••
Words in Axanelelati
We’re trying this format. Letter approximations aren’t great (I have to make compromises and it’s based on how I speak) but I’m going do that plus a squint at the IPA chart to see if I can do that too
Syllables = sy·lla·bles || Emphasis/stress is going to be represented with ' for primary stress and ˌ for secondary stress (on the stressed syllable)
Glottal stop ʔ (<- that thing) is pronounced like the bit in “uh-oh” where it skips. I can’t really approximate it another way.
Kī/ksirr/kīxun (key/k-seer/key-HOON) /kiː/ /ksir/ /kiː·'xun/ = hunter pronouns, use the same format as it/its/itself (kī/ksirr/kī-self)
Itex/itexirr/itexun (E-teh/e-teh-HEAR/e-teh-HOON) /'i·tex/ /ˌi·te·'xir/ /ˌi·te·'xun/ = pronouns for a child born in winter, same format as it/its/itself (itex/itexirr/itex-self)
Library zose ki^anuxa nālam, mo? (LIE-bree zo-SAY keyʔAH-new-ha naah-LAM, mo?) /'laɪ·bɹi/ /ˌzo·'se/ /'kiʔa·nu·ˌxa/ /ˌnaː·'lam/ /mo/ = Library is house of stories, right?
Kxi^anuxa = kxi (piece) + ewanuxa (den, village, home) = a piece of the home/den, a building. (Fun fact: in-universe, the translations are like this because Lelaxotayanetek is a kid who really likes wolves, and they’re the one who ends up co-writing the first Axanelelati to English dictionary. As an adult, they still feel like their original words fit best)
Nālam = story, stories. Stories in either spoken or written format
Krrakata zoxtok (krrah-kah-TAH zoh-tok) /'kra·ka·ˌta/ /'zox·ˌtok/= crunching metal, metal teeth. A beartrap.
Zose ilutat ksateke (zo-SAY E-loo-taht k-sah-teh-KAY) /ˌzo·'se/ /'i·lu·ˌtat/ /ksa·'tek·ˌe/ = is bloody and cripples you/makes you unable to walk. The word “ksateke” = ksa (no) + teke (walk).
Miwa (ME-wah) /'mi·wa/ = sire-parent
Tonuako^itayanek (TON-new-ah-kohʔe-TAH-yan-EK) /'to·ˌnu·a·ˌkoʔi·'ta·jan·'ek/ = Lakestalker
Ewanuxa (eh-WAH-new-HA) /e·'wa·nu·ˌxa/, ewanuxa^ese (eh-WAH-new-HAʔE·SAY) /e·'wa·nu·ˌxaʔe·ˌse/ = home, homes (plural indicating two).
Mo zose kekone takrraxit? (mo zo-SAY keh-kohn-AY tahk-RRA-heet) /mo/ /ˌzo·'se/ /'ke·kon·ˌe/ /ˌtak·'ra·xit/ = are there any traps? (lit. will the path strike/attack?)
Ksa = no
Kiwa (key-wah) /ki·wa/ = parent (neutral/no biological relation)
Mo mewa? Mo Lelasenaka^ataxa (mo MEH-wah? mo LEH-lah-SEH-nah-KAHʔAT-a-XA) /mo/ /'me·wa/ /mo/ /'le·la·ˌse·na·'kaʔat·a·ˌxa/ = Where’s my dam-parent? Where’s Clearvoice?
Mext xa. Lelasenaka^ataxa zose onauzi. (meht ha. LEH-lah-SEH-nah-KAHʔAT-a-XA zo-SAY oh-NOW-zee) /mext/ /xa/ /'le·la·ˌse·na·'kaʔat·a·ˌxa/ /ˌzo·'se/ /o·'nau·zi/ = Past breathing. Clearvoice is dead. (lit. Clearvoice is a memory stone)
•••
Character Masterpost














