Who gave you the goddamn right to write a piece as beautiful as that!?? Who?? I want to know!! First of all, how dare they? Second of all, they need a raise just like Jess. Hell you need a raise too! A raise and praise for you!
You’ve said that comments are your main source of protein, by-god let’s get you some food.
Do I sometimes write down profound, incredible, poetic sentences? Yes
Do I always find something to write down in your fics? Yes
Did I find many today? Yes
Here are some of my favorite show stopping, poetic af words that you wrote:
-She had stripped down her defences, had led Kara by the hand to the softest parts of herself, and Kara had soothed them. She’d laid her palms over Lena’s scars, pressed her lips against the open wounds and whispered promise after promise. She’d sworn to heal her, and then she’d dug her nails into the rawest parts of Lena’s soul and pulled her apart.
-choking on the smoke from all the bridges she’s burning.
-Her heels echo across the worn boards of the dock like gunshots
-Warmth spreads through Lena’s chest as the ashes around her heart start to tremble, as something bright and beautiful and too-long caged bursts forth, blotting out the darkness.
You broke me and then slowly put me back together with these words. Thank you. It was beautiful 💛
