BEX I PROMISED TO YELL AT YOU AND I AM HERE TO DO SO
As per ushe, chapter five of Casually Devoted had me grinning at my phone. I'm always laughing, crying, or horny with your work I swear (IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH SOMETIMES) BUT reading it was a little treat after a busy week so I made notes as I read to share (condensed but still probably absurdly long)
I've said it before, I'll say it again: the chemistry between them is SO GOOD??? The banter, the comfortability, down to the dirty talk?? They are genuinely so compatible and fun to read about even while you're BREAKING MY WHOLE ENTIRE HEART
The YEARNING was so good here. Erik getting so distracted kissing that he accidentally edged Freak way too much?? Idk if you meant it to be but it was so funny (I laughed out loud at several points reading) and also so sexy and also hit me in the feels so congrats with that one. Also him wanting to be held??? Did you at least get me a drink from the gas station on your way to my house to beat me up??
Also not super related but THANK YOU for the crying after a good orgasm exposure. I was JUST discussing how silly I feel when it happens and it was handled so well and just ughhhhh in this chapter.
In short, you've done it again, I'm in tatters and my day is so much better. Thank you for the fantastic start to the weekend okay mwah
Oh my Godddd! Getting this ask made me so fucking happy! I legit squealed when I saw it in my inbox! I am so so fucking glad you loved the new chapter! I am very happy it invoked all the feelings, giddiness, horniness, heartbreak! Just you wait till you see the next few chapters, I am working on six right now and it is gonna be really rough (in more ways than one!) Just you wait! I am gonna legit pummel your heart to a fucking pulp.
Also never apologize for a long ask espeically one like this! It is so powerful at motivating me!
As for the crying post orgasm rep, you are welcome! There are dozens of us out here, Freak included. MWAH!