The blog post ‘Mad About Molvania’ serves as a travel recommendation that aims to persuade readers to visit the European city of Lutenblag. Through personal experience, the author recommends the best hotels, tourists attractions and cuisine within the city. The author further emphasizes that Lutenblag is known for being far less crowded than most other European cities. Ultimately, by discussing the cities various attractions and highlights the author makes a convincing case that Lutenblag is a desirable European destination to visit.
To start, this blog post is extremely disorganized. Clearly, the author lacks structure in their writing as this piece jumps from one idea to another. There are also numerous grammatical errors. For instance, unnecessary words are capitalized, there is a series of run-on sentences and many sentences lack simple clarity. Taking this all into consideration, discuss ways in which the author could have better organized this blog post. Make sure to provide suggestions that you believe would assist the author in structuring their ideas and thoughts more effectively.