Sorry, I'm late (as usual). Happy New Year! :3
I chose not to read the old Suguru Fic so as not to ruin the thrill of reading a rewritten story aaaand I hate you for building the mystery so well! Uh, I have a few ideas floating around in my head about what happened in the past between the reader and Suguru, but the desire to cheat and check the old version grows every day!
Bonus Chapter of Hades: Isn't he the best husband material that ever existed? How sweet and patient he is with the reader. I can't wait to see them together once the transformation is complete!
Poseidon! You're an asshole, bro, but it's nice to see you talking more casually with your brother.
And now Apollo shot. As someone who struggles with English, I'm impressed by how good you are with it. I read it so smoothly that I basically flowed through the words.
Shot itself is very good and even if you wrote it before his backstory was revealed in the manga, I found Apollo quite consistent to his canon counterpart. I mean – this could be his first time experiencing rejection, right? All his thinking and reaching conclusions was wonderful, and the ending was so cute D: It's a shame you didn't show us more of them after the reunion!
Hiii! Happy New Year for you too!!
Well, if you want to check the old version of the Geto ff, you can do it without preoccupations for now, bc the main changes are going to happen after the point where the story stops now. It's not a spoiler, so I can tell you in advance: the were married in the past, and Geto has connections with dark things that happen to reader's family. The whole mystery consists in reader unveiling these secrets while she recovers her innate technique, which is based in controlling memories.
About Hades: yes, let's declare his name another word for husband material! There will be some interesting things to narrate about them after reader's transformation is complete, and I can't wait to write them!
About Apollo: tbh I never considered the possibility of this being his first rejection, but it's a good idea, given the way he reacted to it. I just focused on the "superficial" traits of Apollo to write this ff, but I hope I can do better/deeper stuff with him in the future.
Finally, thank you for your compliments on my English. This isn't my first language, but I've been reading and writing in it for a couple of years now, though I only started posting long stories in English in 2019 or something. I still struggle with some words and expressions, but I'm happy that people can read and understand the message in my writings ❤❤
