Chasing Souls- Chapter 2
Genre: Supernatural
Rating: T
Warning: Not really in this chapter. A spooky ghost story, I guess.
Words: 1330
I really suggest listening to this while reading. Heavily helped me in writing this chapter.
7/6/2017: Edited the ending of the chapter to make dialogue less cheesey and more realistic. please reread
Satin looked herself over in the mirror. She couldn’t believe how different she looked. Her brown hair gently brushed her shoulders, wavy and longer than she thought it was. She always had kept it pulled back up so it wouldn’t get in the way of her reading. The dress wasn't as tight as she thought it was going to be, but it still showed off the natural curve of her hips. It stopped right above her knees, and the boots were enough to cover up most of her legs, but she still felt overexposed. She rubbed her ribbon again and looked at the girl in the mirror. Nervous green eyes peered back at her, and she gave herself a reassuring smile.
A horn honked outside, calling Satin's attention to the window. Allan waved from his Charger in his usual t-shirt, jeans, and leather jacket. At least he had combed his hair. Satin tromped down the stairs in the heavy boots, past her mother who was making sandwiches. "Don't you wanna invite him in to eat?" She asked, holding up a butter knife covered in mayo, but Satin shook her head. "We'll probably eat out! I'll see you later!" "Be back by ten." "Okay, Mom!" Satin slammed the door shut.
Satin settled in the cozy leather seat of Allan's car. Allan didn't say anything, almost didn't notice she was there. "Uh…. Hey?" Satin greeted, putting a hand on his arm. He was shaking. He quickly jerked away physically and jerked out of his thoughts. "What the hell!?" he growled. Satin flinched and his eyes softened. "Sorry.. I just… didn't see you get in the car. I was thinking. Yeah," he murmured. Satin sensed something off in his tone. And why was he shaking like that? "Allan, are you okay? Something happen at home?" The words "parental problems" came to her mind again. "I'm fine. Stop asking.” "But you're shaking-" "I'm fine! We're in Michigan and it's November, it's cold as shit! I said stop asking, so stop," he snapped. Satin sank into her seat. "…Okay. Let's go already," she said quietly, after a moment. Allan pressed on the gas, and the car lurched forward.
Carston was a small town. Allan had driven around the town at least three times, and he kept looking around silently, a nervous expression on his features. Satin watched, bored, as they went by the McDonald's again. Her stomach grumbled, and she was even willing to tolerate a greasy burger if Allan would just stop somewhere. What a lovely anniversary. "Do you know where we're going?" Allan grunted. "Allan?" "It's… uh… a surprise," he answered after thinking for a minute. Satin sighed, "Okay…" and looked out the window again. He had driven out into the rural outskirts of Carston, which were covered in a thin slush of snow. The trees rolled by quickly, and Allan made another turn. Satin glanced at the clock. 7:40. Allan had been driving for forty minutes, and Satin was starting to get annoyed. "Can we at least go eat?" Satin asked as her stomach growled again. "After." "After what?" Allan remained silent, his eyes glancing around everywhere but her. He was definitely upset, Satin could tell by the way he was closing himself off to her. He kept his arms and legs drawn in, when usually while driving, Allan would occasionally brush her hand and smile at her and joke. Satin wanted to say something, but when Allan got like this... it was no use. If she tried, he would just snap at her. She sank into the leather and looked out the window again.
Out of the blue, the car started to slow, and it lurched to a stop. Allan turned off the car and pulled the key out of the ignition. He pocketed it and glanced at Satin through the open door. "Come on, let's go. We're here." Satin got out and stretched her legs, looking around. Allan had parked on the side of the road in front of the town park. "The park?" Satin asked, looking up at the tall iron wrought gates. "Yeah. Got a problem with it?" "No... it's actually kind of romantic. I just don't understand why we drove around for so long." Allan shrugged, looking for words. "I... uh... Can't I drive around with my girlfriend on our anniversary?" Allan questioned. "Whatever. Let's just go." Allan went ahead of her and opened the gate for her. As Satin passed him, she finally recognized the look on his face. He looked guilty.
Satin huddled against Allan for warmth. It was completely dark now, and the temperature was so low Satin could feel her teeth chattering. She hugged his arm, but he didn't bother to wrap an arm around her or offer her his jacket. Why hadn't she put one on like her mother had told her all day? The cold just reminded her of how short her dress was, and she felt even more uncomfortable. "This park has seen better days, huh?" She tried, nudging Allan a bit. He looked around. The paved path was cracked, the trees and bushes were dead, and some of the lamps along the path were flickering. When Satin looked at Allan's face, however, she noticed how nice he looked in this light, and how his eyes sparkled. Despite how he was sometimes, she couldn't deny he at least looked good. She just wished he didn't look so upset. "Hey..." she said softly, gingerly grabbing his hand. "What?" he asked. "I love you. I know something might have- how do I say this without you getting mad- .... happened. At home." She strained for words, tiptoeing around his temper. She added quickly, "And you don't have to talk about it now, but... I'm here for you." She squeezed it with conviction. Allan was quiet. He looked down at his feet and let out a little sigh under his breath. He slipped his hand out of hers and patted her shoulder. “Thanks, I guess...” he said. His eyes looked a little watery. “I meant it!” Satin said, wrapping the other teen in a big hug. Over his shoulder Satin noticed something off the path, covered in thick, dead briar. Allan wiggled out of the hug, looking annoyed, but Satin was already gazing off in the direction of the object, her interest caught. “What the hell are you looking at?” Allan inquired. “There’s something in the bushes over there.” Allan looked in that direction. “Huh... I dunno. Who cares?”
Satin wandered towards it, her legs shaking a bit. It came to her mind that Carston wasn’t the safest town. She kicked away the briar to reveal an old well. It’s red stones were cracked and sun bleached, and the handle was snapped off and nowhere to be found. “What is it?” Allan called. Satin heard him rustling through the brush after her. “Just some old well-” Satin started, turning to face him, but she was interrupted by Allan pushing his lips into hers.
It was a sloppy kiss, but his lips were so soft. Allan wrapped his arms around her waist, exhaling through his nose. Satin was startled and felt heat rush up to her face. Allan’s hands slid up her back, and she gave in, tilting her head to kiss him better and closing her eyes as he pushed her against the well.
For a moment he stopped, breathing hard. He looked emotional, and his brown eyes almost looked red in the light of the streetlamp. Satin’s face was beet red and her lips curved into a little smile. “Allan-” Allan grabbed her shoulder again and kissed for another long moment. His cheeks were wet. He leaned down and whispered in her ear, “I’m so sorry.” Allan shoved her as hard as he could.
It happened so quick. She scraped her knees on the brick. A scream ripped out of her throat. All she could feel was gravity pulling her down, taking her faster and faster, away from the streetlights, away from Allan. The inky black dark of the well swallowed up her vision, and she was gone.











