Clean Slates was another winner for me. The banter in it was just as entertaining as the banter in canon, and a great plot too. I liked that you added little show elements to the AU (The Nemeton and the exchange about Prada, for example. They're like little Easter Eggs) Speaking of the Prada lines, I love that you included them. Classic 3a bantering. There were so many good lines, like after they got Peter and Lydia says that Stiles really got him and she had honesty in her eyes. Cont.
One caveat I have is a death of detailed description, but that’s just my personal thing. Besides that, this fic shines it all of it’s comedic and fluffy glory. The ending is superb might I add. The fic ties together like strings on a present being wrapped. And what a present you created. Rachel did a great job editing for you too. From one writer to another, you write well. Keep it up.
Okay. Wow. I’m so sorry I didn’t answer this before. I know you sent it like forever ago and I’m SO sorry! This is so nice and you are so thoughtful, I feel really bad.
So thank you! I really appreciate it ❤ It makes my day. I’m so pumped you noticed the little references to canon because it’s literally my favourite thing to write in an AU.
As for the description… I know. I’m glad you pointed it out because it makes me want to work even harder on it. I’m never satisfied by it either!
This message is just so sweet so thank you again!! I don’t deserve all the comments you’ve been leaving on my fics.