How to Write a Demand Letter – Part 1
Recently Parris Trimble, Esq. of Greenbaum Law Group gave a two part video series on how to write your own demand letter. She covers topics ranging from knowing who to send the letter to, to keeping it short & simple and more.
Read the Full Transcript Below:
Hi, my name is Parris Trimble and I’m an attorney here at Greenbaum Law Group. Greenbaum Law Group is a commercial collection and judgment enforcement firm. Today is the first of a two-part video where I’m going to share with you some tips on how to write your own demand letter.
The first tip for today is to know who to send the letter to, and by that I mean we often send it to the accounts payable person but the accounts payable person doesn’t always have the authority to write the check. Send it to the CEO or perhaps if the company has an in-house counsel, send it to the in-house Counsel as well. You wanted to send it to as many people as possible. We have this saying around the office that we always want to get stuff off our desk. So if you send it, it’s on everyone’s desk, and if you have something on your desk you look at it and say how do I get rid of this & you give it to the person who can handle it. That’s the goal there. The more persistent you are the more likely you are to get noticed.
The second principle is the kiss principle, keep it short and simple, and by that simply say “we have not received payment for X please make payment to…” This is really short with no feelings and no emotions. Don’t let them have you play the go fetch game. How many times have you heard “Oh we never received the invoice…” send a copy of the unpaid invoice with the demand letter to cut out that extra step.
And finally, don’t give extended payment terms. Shift the burden over to them. For example, you can say “If payment is not received by X date” maybe 5 or 10 days away, “we understand this as your invitation to…” then you can either say “begin collection proceedings” or “to suspend your account”
Next week, we will cover more of this topic in our post “How to Write a Demand Letter – Part 2.”
Originally published at https://collectionlaw.com on January 15, 2021.














