#corrected scenes

[ambidextrousarcher]

13 and 21 for the WIP asks?

13. There was a scene in which Karn insults Arjun, taking a dig at Kunti, basically calling her a whore. For all that I hate Karn, I felt that the scene was excessive. I changed it to Arjun hearing whispers of various sorts and asking about it to Bheem.

21. Haha, I don’t know most of the common writing rules. But you know that the paragraph rule is one I’ve never followed.

Thanks for the ask, @shaonharryandpannisim!