do NOT over describe. ever.
I used to do this a lot when I was younger; I’d literally go to the thesaurus and type in every second word to use the best, the most complex synonyms I could find to express what to say. Just so I could sound intelligent. -_-
Honestly, you end up sounding very verbose and it makes it very hard for the reader to stay engaged and keep track of where the plot’s heading.
e.g. Terry’s hazel, flecked eyes were filled with worry and despair as he watched the buildings crumble to nothing, stumbling maladroitly through the rubble and sinking to his knees as he lifted his head to the heavens and cried. Tears streamed down his face, the clear tracks weaving their way through his skin and dripping onto the ground.
wowza that was pretty bad.
revised eg. Inside, he could feel despair curl its iron fist around his heart as he watched the buildings crumble to nothing, watched as all that once was, tear itself apart.
Hands grazing against the rubble and dirt, he lifted his face to the heavens and cried.
You don’t need to describe every single detail. Make the reader really work to find the subtleties in your writing; this delivers the emotive aspect even better.
It’s okay to use some simple sentences every once in a while.
And in some cases, this is way more effective than having long, winded, thesaurus dribble :)