you know I adore your writing, so let's gets specific here: you write og elias, jonah and jonahlias so very differently from one another, and it SHOWS. a LOT. even if the dialogue might look similar in some cases, there are always some details that signal that these are, in fact, two distinct people/personas and i find that AMAZING?? and the fact that you decided to develop not only jonah himself but also baby elias is something i haven't really seen anywhere else and it's very specific of your portrayal, and i can't tell you how much i love seeing you talk about and develop both the baby and the bastard. idk you're okay i guess </3
god imagine this nerd, imagine actually spending time with him like who would ever x/
no but i'm gently weeping (as per usual) bc really... i'm trying hard to make them distinct from one another (given that TWO ARE VERY DIFFERENT PEOPLE and there's also two centuries of (negative) character development between the others) and i'm just glad it shows... also i care about the child way too much for him having one statement that just revolts back to jonah anyway afddag i hate how much i also care about this bastard but I guess that was to be expected with how long it's been since I've written any villains... i'm just glad i get to write with you sm and i guess you're maybe fine and maybe i'll visit you again idk









