ditching 1500 words of my wip to rewrite it from a different pov and it's working soooo much better now.
seen from Australia
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ditching 1500 words of my wip to rewrite it from a different pov and it's working soooo much better now.
I’ve finished another chapter! :)
Berit clenched his jaw, irrationally angry now. Maybe not irrationally at that – he had been shot. And that hurt. And now he was being condescended at. And this stranger was threatening someone who clearly had no idea how to defend himself.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12649812/15/Who-pays-the-price
1 hour 15 minutes 1400 words oh yeah