Model Behavior AO3 Update!
Whew, I’m so happy to say I started posting the chapter rewrites for Ch 1-3 on AO3! It was definitely an experience going back into my old 2008 chapters, but I’m glad I did because some of the things I found (in my opinion) were a bit cringey. (I found a carmelldansen reference…dear god)
I didn’t do a full overhaul, in fact most of it is the same, but I updated the language and took out some inconsistencies that could throw off the flow of the story. For example, I cut back on the offensive language Shinji and Hikari sometimes used and also cleaned up some unnecessary writing.
It’s not terribly different, in fact I probably could have done more with the rewrites, but I was just so eager to start getting the chapters up on AO3. I’ll keep working at it! Once I get to chapter 6 or so I should be able to post the rest of the chapters without edits.
Thanks for still following this story, and for keeping your faith in me! I’ve come to realize this story is going to be far bigger than what I originally intended, and that’s so exciting.
I can’t wait to see it to the end!
AO3 Model Behavior: Prologue-Ch 3
https://archiveofourown.org/works/28083588/chapters/68806236
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