I just finished reading “Babel” and I was just wondering whether I was the only one who was left a little bit...dissatisfied by the book? Don’t get me wrong, as a translator myself I deeply enjoyed the book’s treatment of languages, I loved the setting, I thought the worldbuilding was magnificent. I also deeply respect Kuang’s commentary on racism, orientalism, colonialism, and I think she did a fantastic job with it (and as a white person, I don’t have the perspective to comment on it anyway).
What I found a little bit underwhelming and almost unfinished were...the characters themselves? Not only were most of the side characters very one-dimensional good-or-evil, I never even felt like Ramy, Victoire and Letty were fully fleshed out. While I completely get what Kuang wanted to convey with Letty’s character it also felt like she was more of a prop than a full character? What also left me completely baffled was how it seemed like we saw the tiniest hints of a love story between Robin and Ramy (the scene in the park early on in the book, Ramy saying he could never return Letty’s feelings (which I read as much as a reference to sexuality as it was a reference to race) and then that ambiguous comment about “falling in love” right before Robin’s death) and then the book just...entirely forgot about it? Why put the subtext in there at all? Why begin this construct and then completely abandon it? Don’t get me wrong! I love it when books don’t require romance to construct a compelling plot! I don’t even think we would have needed anything to happen between them! But the fact that I was expecting something, anything, to happen throughout the entire book just left me feeling slightly confused.
What everything really boils down to is that I felt like we were TOLD about the relationships between the four more than we were ever SHOWN, and it just really made me feel like the book was lacking heart. There would be time skips of months at a time and we would just read something like “We spent many long evenings in the library together and they became the most important people in the world to me during that time” OKAY, BUT WHY DO WE NEVER SEE ANY OF IT? I wanted to experience them growing closer to each other! I wanted to feel it! I understand that the focus of the book was on the message it was delivering and I completely respect that but if you have four main characters grow into very close friends over the course of the book, you should at least let me FEEL that friendship in some way. This also made the end so much less shocking to me because while Victoire was talking about how she and Letty could never truly become friends and how race was always what separated them, it just felt odd because we didn’t even get to see their group dynamic all that often. We didn’t much get to see them interact as friends.
Anyway, I truly enjoyed the book a lot and will still rate it four stars but I couldn’t help but feel a little bit disappointed after all the hype.