I'm enjoying your fic a lot! usually every psychonaut level has a few puzzles to solve and I think you incorporated that well with the flow of your writing, which made the last chapter really diferent, as there as no way out of most situations Raz and Coach where on. Felt like they where just spectators and felt as hopelessly as loboto going through those hard times
Thank you so much! I was trying really hard to make it feel like a Psychonauts level. I don't include every mechanic (debated for a while on whether or not to include emotional baggage, but it didn't seem right, since Raz had *just* cleared it out a few days prior), but I did want to give it that vibe.
Speaking of the fic, I am currently in the process of finishing the penultimate chapter! I'd thought I would've been able to finish this a while ago, but the scene I'm at is a lot more challenging to write than I was expecting it to be. I really want to make sure this is a satisfying chapter because it's a very important one, so it may be another week or so before it's done. So it'll be another bit of a wait, but hopefully a worthwhile one. \o/;