#disconnectedrpg

[silexhelps]

Ugh! So, I went to write up the review and once I had it all finished tumblr deleted it! I'll go back to write again later. It's taking longer then expected because my sister ended up having to go to the ER and I had to sit with her until my parents got home to make sure she didn't pass out. Anyway, I'll try to get it done by tonight!

[silexhelps]

Hello there! Could you give us a full review please? Thank you very much in advance x

Sure thing, love! I’ve got just a few questions left on my homework and then I will begin!

[camilaofrpc-blog]

Hello! Could we have a detailed review please? Thank you in advance x

Sure thing! It's under the cut!

So, the emojis in the icon threw me off because when I went onto your blog, it almost looks like an old war RPG. Zayn Malik is your mascot so, like, A+ on that. As I'm reading the plot, I'm a little confused by the graphics. It seems odd that you have such macabre graphics for such a simple plot. It almost looks horrific? Like, some type of horror plot and the plot written up completely disregards that. I'd change that much. Your guidelines are short and to the point. I like that. Your FC selections are diverse but not too bad. Not far fetched and I like that too. Although I don't think Demi could play 18, nor could Taylor Momsen. That's just me. 

So, I'm really into this idea of your RPG, but the graphics are everywhere. I'd definitely change them or at least just the sidebar. The background is fine, but the sidebar is so sketchy looking. That's just my opinion though.

[animcrpt]

Hello there, could we get an opinion please? Thank you x

Aw, your icon is cute. I’m not really feeling the theme or the graphics, it kind of bores me, I don’t know. They’re not bad though. The navigation looks a little like a mobile navi or something because it’s a little bit plain. Wow, I’m actually planning to do a gap year after High School so this plot is pretty cool. Nothing too original, but it could be interesting if you ask me. I like the FCs you picked for the skeleton page but I think you need two pages. One for female and one for male — just to keep things organized, you know? But I just really love how they’re basically all underused (with a few exceptions, maybe). This is a definite rec from me, yo.