Below the cut is a review for @ephemererpg.
Please remember that these are my opinions and not to take offense to anything I have said. If the admins would like this taken down, please message me and I am happy to do so. Also be aware that I actively look for things to improve on, rather than just gushing about the group so expect some constructive criticism.
ICON AND URL (6/10)
Your icon if very pretty, very flashy. I really like the very simple ‘E’ on it, rather than putting the entire group name or URL. On the other hand, your URL is confusing. I’m gonna be honest, I even googled it because I thought it may have been some fancy word, but I have no idea what it means. I’d be really grateful if you explained that to me because I hate not knowing things.
MAIN/THEME (10/10)
I’m in love with your color scheme. Purple and dark grey is a wonderful choice, because not many groups use it. It really makes you stand out, it’s recognizable and I know for a fact that I’ve seen you guys before somewhere because I remember it. (Also, the main graphic is just awesome, I love it)
PLOT (7/10)
It’s a very detailed plot which is wonderful, but the graphics you have there are very difficult to read. They look amazing, they really do, but maybe remake them with a different font because even with my glasses on I have to squint and lean into my screen. I just about got it, but there are still a couple words I’m unsure on. I’m also not 100% on what the actual point of the group is. Without going through the rest of your group, what is it about? The customers? The Employees? The people trying to take it down? Just explain exactly what will be happening upon joining the group, there needs to be clear instructions as well as the creative information you already have.
NAVIGATION/RULES (8/10)
Very standard, well explained rules in easy to read section and bullet point. (5/5)
Your navigation is very flashy and confusing at first, it took a couple of seconds for me to realize I needed to click each image to pull up the navigation. You could actually fix this by editing a little arrow or putting the titles of each slide on to the actual images, then re-uploading them. Otherwise, I would suggest going with a simpler navi page. Other than that, you have all the relevant links and pages there.
Also, on your main page, the word for proceed for the next pages might be clearer as simply ‘next’. (I warned you that I actively look for things) (3/5)
CHARACTERS (6/10)
Please please please add an ‘all’ tag for all characters. It’s such a bother to go through each and every tag, especially as an RPH.
You definitely need more ethnic diversity here. I’m happy to give you a list of good POCs to use, as I’ve just been updating my own group’s bios and adding more POC. Body Diversity is also needed here, because from what I can see you don’t have any.
The bios are really wonderfully written though, and have amazing detail and information in them. Your ages are pretty diverse too, but you have a lot of taken 24 year olds.
OVERALL (37/50)
I’d suggest writing some more bios, and focusing on upping your diversity. It’s not hard at all the get to 30% POC which is what I think the lowest should be, as well as some body diversity and more age diversity. Make sure you’re promoting a lot and using the right tags, you’re doing great.
