#estelle!

[beepboopchickensoup]

I should probably finish my homework or do something productive *dances around room listening to Steven Universe for an hour*

[shoddylottie]

😘🧡🧡🧡

[noyin]

Breaking Point(cuz I'm obsessed!)

3: What’s your favorite line of narration?4: What’s your favorite line of dialogue?11: What do you like best about this fic?12: What do you like least about this fic?

3: tbh, this fic is about 50k words and I sadly don't remember every piece of narration that I felt proud of, esp in the beginning, sooo....

I'm going to go with: "The sun doused him in golden flakes, which settled against the structure of his cheeks, and in his lashes, and woven delicately through his hair. And the sight of blue flowers reflected into his distant eyes."

4: This questions suffers from the same issues I had with #3

But naturally I have to go with this iconic line from Yuga himself: “Your forgiveness does matter to me,” Yuga said, his saddened expression softening with a small smile. He turned back to the ocean and, moreso to himself than to Link, he whispered, “You matter to me.”

11: Mainly, I like that this fic features a rarepair & explores their enemies to lovers dynamic. But I also like that overarching plot I'm making up as I go along. I also like that the writing gets better as the story goes along. I am proud of my progress :D

12: I dislike the lackluster beginning and the pacing of the fic. and I don't have specific examples but I feel like there are some ooc moments here and there... which are cringe honestly. I haven't read the fic in its entirety in a while, which is probably for the better, bc I'm sure i'd have a lot more to say in this answer lol

[mootpoint]

Yes, you guys! Estelle featuring Janelle Monae! Two of my favourite music ladies! Together! It's not as exciting as when Beyonce and Lady Gaga teamed up but it's close, and it feels a little bit more like it's especially for me.

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