5 Works in Progress Meme
Pick 5 works in progress. Go to the 5th paragraph and post 5 sentence starting from that point.
These are all mostly untouched from their first draft forms (in other words, not polished and edited, except for some slight structure/grammar clean up to make them not horrible).
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Belle finds out that she can’t go home again. Whatever joy she thought her father would have at seeing his only daughter again slips away from him at the words the priest whispers in his ear.
Her father has her locked in an unused tower in the west wing of the castle.
When the priests come with their holy books, their candles, their manacles and whips, they don’t speak to her but over her, calling her tainted, unclean, the devil’s whore. They hurt her.
- Untitled, Rumbelle fic
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Faith couldn’t quite find the words to explain that as much as she had come to love Megaton, as much as she had come to get to know and enjoy—at least some of—the people of the Capital Wasteland, it wasn’t home. Home was the place she’d grown up, the place she’d thought she’d been born in, that lay mere miles from her Megaton doorstep, shut off to her. Forever.
Home was the man who’d raised her, who’d taught her how to hack into her first computer, how to splint broken bones and mend tears in clothes as well as skin. The man who’d kissed her forehead and then left her to the tender mercies of the citizens of Vault 101 when he thought the time had come to finish the work he’d started before she was born.
- “Off the Map,” Hearts on Fire series
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“But he is faithful to the traditions. He may be tempted, but he meditates, swims in the cold river every morning to cool his blood. He won’t allow himself to fall until he’s certain he can do so and remain true to himself and his faith.”
“No sex before marriage, huh?”
She could see the smile in Joshua’s eyes. “In short.”
- “Sweet Nothings,” Hearts on Fire series.
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His jaw set, Rumplestiltskin wound fresh muslin strips around his foot, binding muscle and bone tightly. Too much so, if the shock of pain that leapt from his ankle to the base of his knee was to be believed. Stars exploded behind his eyes, the big muscle of his leg shivered and he grit his teeth against the flood of hurt, breathing harshly through his nose as it tapered off, settled to a dull throb. As he’d done since the moments after he’d swung the hammer that crippled him, he sent out a silent plea, that even if he should never walk fair again, the pain would at least lessen, leave him capable of movement that didn’t leave him half blind and whimpering. And it wasn’t a plea just for himself.
- “Yellow,” Color Wheel challenge (1/5)
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Labintias, yunoks Jidai*, he'd said, the language strange and sibilant and coiling around Obi-Wan like a snake. Obi-Wan had reached for his lightsaber only to find the alley empty as his fingers closed around the hilt, the presence of the man fading from his mind like a wisp of smoke on the air.
The next time they met, they crossed sabers, as Obi-Wan protected a member of the Royal House of Kuan-tu on Aleria Prime.
“He's not worth your protection,” the Sith had told him. “The entire family should earn your ire.”
- From an untitled Star Wars fic, featuring Sith!Qui-Gon (Darth Sotiris)
*Greetings, little Jedi
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BONUS Obi-Wan knocked on the door. There was no answer, but the handle turned easily and the door swung open. Beyond it, lay a simple sitting room, doused in orange and red shadows from the fire in the hearth. There was a low couch and, in front of it, a table set with a platter of bread and fruits and two empty bowls no doubt meant to hold the contents of the pot that was bubbling in front of the fireplace.
Even as his vision blurred again, Obi-Wan scoffed softly at the convenience, remembering some old tale he’d heard in the creche about a girl and an enchanted palace where all her needs were seen to by invisible servants.
- Untitled piece, initially intended to be part of a spooky set for October, but got waylaid because I started too late.








