#fc:flamepaw

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NEWLEAF 1 page 4

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Hazelpaw has been apprenticed to Dovefoot!

Flamepaw has been apprenticed to Ashstar!

BEAR WITH ME AS I FIGURE OUT SPEECH BUBBLES AND TEXT SIZE... This was very fun to do! A lot of work, but very fun!!

Written text beneath the cut!

Ashstar: "I know you're still quite young and inexperienced, but how would you like to mentor Hazelpaw?"

Dovefoot: "You— you can count on me!"

Ashstar: "And I'll mentor Flamepaw myself."

Flamepaw: "Huh?"

Flamepaw: "Wait— ME?! Really?!"

Ashstar: "Sure! You remind me of myself when I was your age. It'll be fun."

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NEWLEAF 1 page 2

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SLOWLY LEARNING HOW TO COMIC... not every page will be this polished probably but lalala

Written text beneath the cut!

Starlingpaw: "Where the past ends, the future begins."

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NEWLEAF 1 page 6

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I was going to withhold this page till next week but since I finished it fast and I felt bad for how long it’s taken me to get them out, I thought I’d post it now! Enjoy!

I am so sorry for the inconsistency with the backgrounds, I got a new iPad between the first few pages and now so I don’t have all the brushes I used to. And I’m not great at backgrounds LOL. Still learning to do speech bubbles and dialogue, especially because I tend to be wordier with speech than here. I might start doing the shorter speech I do on pages and elaborate under the cuts? Not sure.

Anyway, expect simpler pages with one or two panels interspersed with these more standard comic pages. It’ll depend on the interactions and how much story I can squish into them. Also for the sake of time and energy it is helpful.

Written dialogue under the cut

Flamepaw: “This is too hard!”

Ashstar: “Are you thinking about quitting? I thought you had more determination than this.”

Flamepaw: “I do! I swear!”

Ashstar: “Good. We need strong warriors.”

Ashstar: “Can you meet my expectations?”

Flamepaw: “Yes!”

Ashstar: “Come on, then. Let us try again.”

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NEWLEAF 1 page 5

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This is part one of a two-part set!

I am so sorry it took me a million years to post this, hopefully page 6 won’t take me so long. I have it sketched out already. I am going to probably do more simple backgrounds unless the panel really demands focus on them for the sake of time and my sanity.

Written text beneath the cut!

*rustle* *rustle* *rustle* *rustle*

*FWOOSH*

*swipe*

Flamepaw: “Ugh. I suck.”

Ashstar: “You were making too much noise.”

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FLAMEPAW - SHE/HER - APPRENTICE OF FISSURECLAN

wise, picky nest builder & confident with words

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here's a preview of the upcoming update!