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[twilightprince101]

CONQUEST REWRITTEN -- CHAPTERS 8-10 NOW AVAILABLE

Chapters 8-10 are now included! These additions include:

-Changing Elise to be less of a child and more of a little sister -More of Garon being a manipulative piece of shit -Ripple effects of Livéle's decision related to the prophecy -Giving Azura more significance on screen early on, along with a genuine motivation for traveling with Livéle -The beginnings of Livéle's "no killing" policy, and the consequences that will come...

Will likely continue to update these in three chapter chunks/arcs. I like to consider this section "The Paragon Arc."

Up next, "The Consequences Arc~"

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[Original text of Elise letting slip the fact that Livéle's group is here to suppress the Ice Tribe's rebellion, to the leader of the Ice Tribe rebellion. Because she thought "suppress" meant have a picnic]

[Rewritten text, where Elise adds to the suspicion but doesn't reveal the secret (while still acting a little childish). Instead, Flora reveals the secret since she assumes Livéle has come with bad intentions, since the person who wields the Yato is fated to "end the war." And she's with the Nohrians.]