hey luv ur writing i just have a genuine question if you’re open to discourse and such. The writing about peter and the compound was amazing 🤩 but most of it spent time talking about how Y/N was very drunk and peter still slept with her. If she’s in that state where she’s drunk and he’s “cutting her off” and he’s completely sober it would kinda be a dick-ish move on his part and, depending on the conditions, non-consensual. 
Hi! I appreciate feedback like this so much.
When writing this, I pictured the reader (Y/N) to be more buzzed than drunk at the point of Y/N’s confession, so I’m glad you pointed that out!
I will make a point this week to go back and slightly edit “Christmas at the Compound” (nothing that’ll change the plot for those who already read it) to explain the reader’s state more straightforward!
Thank you so much again for the feedback!!