Dec 16, 2016
Stop Frame: First Draft Presentation
After showing the first draft to the class, they gave us feedback and although they liked the silhouettes and the detail in the cuts, there were some things we could improve upon and most of their comments were about the background i.e. clouds, moon and mountains where moving too fast, which we agreed upon, so we decided to use 12 fps on our next draft to slow things down as we used 24 fps on our first draft.
Another comment was on the ghost; some said that they didn’t notice it at first and that it looked less as a ghost, but more of a bird, so we decided to cut out a new silhouette for the ghost in our next draft.