Honey Bear's Cafe OP, Angelic Pretty’s upcoming release. I think the other colorways are fine and probably will sold out but for the brown colorway I think it's off.
How would I fix it? I think the brown should be lighter to be in nice balance with the print. The yellows of the dress seem too green yellow, I would adjust them to be more like golden orange yellow instead just like honey! The shapes of the melty collar, bib and apron could be better. Now they remind me more of an egg instead of honey. For example with the collar it looks better to have the usual collar shape defined more clearly and adjusted just slightly with the melty detail to avoid kind of confusing collar shape. I don't think the gingham pattern works in the sleeve cuffs. The AP text on the bib felt too much, I added bear buttons instead. As usual I also added two bows, these could also work in pink!
(Stock photo source: Angelic Pretty Online Shop)
(NOTE: This is just my personal, humble opinion, though being quite direct with my opinion I mean no disrespect by any means!)










