My SEVENTH comic! Featuring the Smoke Ring duo from @idiotwhotalkstoomuch Demon Senjuro AU variation! A walk through a fruit orchard reveals some things.
convo between me and @idiotwhotalkstoomuch:
angstandhappiness: Would Senjuro say "You mean you ran away from your training" or "You mean you escaped from your training" in response to Zenitsu talking about how he takes "breaks" from his training. Travelling through a fruit orchard, first section! Is Sen implying that Zenitsu didn't remember a demon's restriction diet? Do you think this makes for a cute Zenitsu pouty face?
angstandhappiness: Also apparently some orchard owners take their traps VERY seriously
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: He might though he'd probably be sympathetic to him running away from the harsh training while also wishing he did partake more in said training so he's more useful when fighting rogue demons. Basically just mixed bag regarding what he feels about Zenitsu running from training though yes he probably will point out he was running away lmao. I like it, its cute and hilarious on Zenitsu
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Aww its nice Zenitsu brights up their mood a bit by showing his favorite fruit to Senjuro, even if Sen helpfully points out they cant eat it cause it tastes like ash and they cant digest human food
angstandhappiness: What do you think of the "Trap" comment?idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Donât really understand it, could you explain?
angstandhappiness: Do you think Zenitsu tried to eat a fruit after he became a demon? Also, Senjuro noticed an axe swinging towards Zenitsu and said "Trap" to warn him. The axe is the orchard owner's trap for fruit thieves
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Ahhh. Hilarious  Zenitsu would probably try despite his instincts staying STOP WHAT ARE YOU DOING and instantly regret it lmao.Senjuro would chuckle at this
angstandhappiness: LMAO đ€Ł THAT'S WHAT HIS FACE IS IMPLYING. HE DID BUT WOULD RATHER NOT ADMIT IT
angstandhappiness: Which do you think is more impactful, Senjuro's foot accidentally crushing a fallen peach fruit, or Zenitsu accidentally stepping on it instead, the crushed peach reminding Zenitsu of his demon state right now
idiotwhotalkstoomuch:Â Probably Senjuro accidentally steps on it, itâs not always Zenitsu whoâs fucking up lmao
angstandhappiness: Second section! Peach insides on your bare feet feels gross. Zenitsu does not want to think the implications of the axe trap.
angstandhappiness: The fruits shown first were oranges, lemons, and apples Zenitsu feels disappointed in himself. Senjuro changes the subject, in a way. Success?
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Awwww. I like how Senjuro switched back to fruits which is what they went there for in the first place. Zenitsu would beat himself so hard about becoming a demon đ He would think his Gramps is so disappointed in him when he would be proud he resisted his instincts as a demon and chose to cling onto his humanity
angstandhappiness: Have you read my second section?
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: What second section?
angstandhappiness: The one where Zenitsu gets strangled by a rope while grabbing a peach fruit. This one
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Oh I missed this somehow hold on. HAHAHAHAAHA aww its cute how fondly Zenitsu talks about his Gramps and how Senjuro is also charmed by the story but also willing to point out what Zenitsu's breaks really are lol
angstandhappiness: Would you like for the orchard comic to end with a flashback, or them two demons walking to the moon?
theidiotwhotalkstoomuch: hmmm probably end with them walking to the moon. Iâm debating between the two but I like them walking to the moon more, I mean Senjuro did just switch the topic so having a flashback maybe would be more appropriate another time
angstandhappiness: Can you guess why Senjuro said apricots?idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Did he like that as a human?
angstandhappiness: You'll see đ . Why Senjuro likes apricots đ„Č Also the last two conversations can be from any of them, it's ambiguous who said it first
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Ah I see I was about to ask lol
angstandhappiness: What do you think of the panel flashbacks?idiotwhotalkstoomuch: I like it, its cute that apricots remind him of his older brother and when he's human again he's probably excited to try them and ends up liking them. I like it, itâs subtle and faded but since we know who Kyojuro is we know exactly who heâs remembering
angstandhappiness: Do the flashbacks make you sad though? The second to last panel had something different to it. Kyojuro's first kanji means apricot
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Iâm numb to hurting them at this point lol, I love how worried Kyojuro looks in that panel despite being next to Senjuro saying "safe" he looks far from safe. OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHI didnât know that. You learn something new everyday
angstandhappiness: YES YOU NOTICED IT Did you see the eyebags? Does that last panel's conversation seem random to you?
angstandhappiness: It's supposed to take place at the same time as the boys were walking in the orchard, the 2nd to last panel. You meant Kyojuro feeling far from safe or Kyojuro doesn't give off the feeling of safety
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Iâm guessing its flashing to how Kyojuro currently is to contrast to Senjuro's memories of him. Kyojuro feels far from safe
angstandhappiness: It's in wikia. YEAH YEAH YEAH. Ever since he lost his brother, Kyojuro's world has been tilted, even if he doesn't show itWhat about the last Panel?
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: I like it, it fits the casual vibe of their conversation as they continue to explore the area they're in
angstandhappiness: Senjuro's hair so long, it drags
idiotwhotalkstoomuch: Man needs a haircut mao
















