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things which piss me off, today's edition: a task i've been procrastinating on for Two (2) Entire Weeks taking literally eight (8) minutes, including the obligatory dissociate out the window while chewing on phrases time

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #no idk why i'm like this either lmfao #......that's not totally true some of it is Static #Six Days Overdue for blood hours right now and i'm about to start killing about it

sigh, y'all. i have THOROUGHLY Time Knifed myself with these revisions

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #Yeah Yeah The Horrifying Fucked Up Sears and JC Penneys. We've All Seen Them. Yawn.#(i don't THINK it's yawn i think it works but wow i've been here for nine years and the source dreams are further in the rearview than that #(so it's hard to gauge efficacy)#but relatedly: awwwww. first mention of Glad It's Not Linoleum.#driscoll does not have a freeze response. except! ☝️ for shitty linoleum lol #i save those ramifications for The Hospital of course >:D

*squints* do the kids these days still play Perfection (the terrifying board game) or,,,

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #i had to google 'game where pieces go flying if you lose' for this btw #the similes. they Need Me.#i just dunno if its dating myself to mention it. if the game's been around since 1975 and AYE played it in the 90s or 2000s it can't be dea #right???

maybe i WILL take the coward's way out (stop typing this scene because the first word on the next page is "ICEE", and i don't have the bandwidth to decide how to stylize it In Manuscript™)

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #unfortunately i do now want a blue icee desperately yeah #this simile slaps so hard

i am also currently running walking away from the next little bit because it includes: a) THREE flavors of weird metaphysical powers colliding; b) seeing the gnawed-upon corpse of an ally we liked a lot; c) the emotional fallout of said gnawed-upon corpse, as a precursor to the metaphysical powers collision; d) skewering ANOTHER beloved while somehow having the clarity of mind to snap a couple revelations into place; and e) trying to thread an ongoing health emergency believably through all this. you see the kind of stress i am under.

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #look i wasn't planning on xiaohong getting chewed on but i think it feeds the Themes too well not to (sorry girl)#ill write you a post credits scene. you and Marshall can hang out in the Badly Treated Character Lounge

ack, i really thought typing would be the Easier Route™ tonight, but alas: i forgor the way into this scene has kicked my ass every time, too,

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #it's the mall :(#it's because it was PEAK episodic and now it's not #or i'm trying to make it not #also it was a cold open for hazard intro and i stitched some context back in #and so now i don't like where the description picks up #fuck meeee. it's going back in timeout i think.#we try again tomorrow.#the description is mid. the character intro is also....mid probably #tam-tam is here and i do love that but girl why. hazard should be here first probably lol #also I HATE DESCRIBING CHARACTERS WHO ARE DEARLY BELOVED BY POV!!!#like yeah that's Driscoll's Hazard. obviously. driscoll looks at their hazard and thinks MyHazard #driscoll does NOT look at TheirHazard and think Here's A Detailed Description Of Him (because i do not do that)#so i haven't seeded enough details early enough so.......sigh #yeah i'm going to bed lol #and by Bed i mean Snack and then Reading

hmmm, either i am PHENOMENAL at using "say" judiciously in this scene, OR i am Too Tired To Do This Properly, and the world may never know which it is

#text #personal #writing #in btw #driscoll #in my defense: it is only twenty instances of 'say' over 5k lol #like i don't use it a lot late-draft #and honestly i sure as fuck SHOULDN"T be at this point #given how long i spent agonizing over Better Ways To Convey Who The Words Are Attached To lol #i do however do a lot of say + ing constructions #he says comma sliding her pie #in my OTHER defense: there are five (5) people in this room #only one of them is he though so that does clarify things #but sam osbourne and lavender are making my life hell

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