things that surprised me about the response incursion has gotten thus far:
no complaints whatsoever(!) about:
>the mysterious grey protagonist or their emaciated claw-like hands(!!! I thought this one would be a killer for sure...nobody even minded? sweet)
>mc having a sexually dominant campy silly ending (ngl thought otome fans may dislike being put in this kind of sexual role. i kept it very fluffy and light all things considered, but i was still worried that beating a guy with a belt would be too Much...)
>the art being mediocre and not anime style(i mean, i do my best, but y'know. sure got a ways to go with it😭)
some complaints about:
>mc being forced to be a smoker (never occured to me that this could be an issue, will remember to make it optional in the future)
>too much cursing (did not at all occur to me how hackleraising the way the average brit swears is to american readers)
>mc being TOO submissive (did not expect this, if anything i figured most otomege avn players would find mc overly aggressive)
major takeaways for next time are "stick to customisable body+gender y/ns for sure, try to give more flavour choices for things like lifestyle options, potentially consider writing in usenglish to feel as natural as possible for more readers and don't be shy with giving mc a bit of a kick"