Dream in general was awesome in your story.
Never saw this kind of savvy and vaguely shady characterization for him. It's sympathetic while also giving a "beware the wrath of a patient man" edge whenever he's around and it's peak
awwwwhhhww thank you so much !! Dream’s characterization was something I thought about a lot- I was determined to write him as something other than ‘innocent sunshine cinnamon roll’ and ‘actually literally the devil he’s so evil’. Dream’s canon characterization is… kinda a mess: contradictory. I took the pieces that I thought were most interesting and tweaked what was left to make sense. He sees himself as incapable of feeling negative emotions- or believes he shouldn’t; In reality he’s just as vulnerable and emotional as the rest of us.
I keep on writing and deleting because I could talk about Dream’s characterization for forever but I feel bad going on such a long tangent. So for now I’ll just leave it here.










