Okay so I just wrote this for you guys to read/give thoughts on (please). I've planned for each chapter to have a particular date of occurrence but to avoid ruining some of the ideas before I publish the actual thing, I'll not include it here.
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[..] The guards were forced to a halt once more as the energetic and sociable blond strode over to a shop and fired up an engaging conversation with the man there. Raucous laughter soon filled the street, the blond doubling over in his laughing fit. Luke stood patiently, waiting for his companion to finish, and gazed around the street, spotting familiar faces and inclining his head to each of them with a small smile.
“Dominus Castellan, you're looking well today!” shouted one. Luke shot a wide smile in their direction.
“As are you, amice!” Luke replied, drawing the attention of the red-faced blond who soon came to his side. Luke cast a glance around them before turning his attention back to the man. “Having fun getting to know the common people, mea princeps?”
The blond next to him smiled, the whites of his teeth flashing in the sunlight and nodded. “It's much more interesting than I thought, Luke,” Luke forced back the urge to cringe and the informality, “And if you refuse to call me Jason as I have asked then I'll be forced to order you to.” Luke nodded meekly.
“As you say, me– Jason.”
“Now isn't that better? It becomes tiring to be addressed as 'Prince' all day, every day.” Jason stretched and looked around before walking ahead. The guards followed immediately while Luke paused and rolled his eyes before following too.
“I wouldn't know, mea princeps.” [..]
-Pseudorific














