#jysella

[immortalizedlove1]

// I like the secondary combat skill option. It helps add more to Jysella’s character background.

[zdbztumble]

I’ve got to be honest: with all due respect to author Jysella, the editor in me would take a fair amount of red ink to this on technical grounds. But the core idea - that the Orange League should’ve been a team league, and that without Tracey, Ash and Misty would’ve been equal partners in that league and pushed further in their...whatever they are direction - is fantastic. Kudos on the concept, and on some very nice scenes between Ash and Misty.