Ahhh the update was so good! Thank you for all your hard work > < ) ! 13k words ?!?! You cooked on this one :0
Trey genuinely scares me (╯︵╰,) He's the type of yandere I'd prefer to avoid at all cost. Cause yk, he can make you lower your guard by showing you how sympathetic he can be of your situation. The way he plays his words to make it easy to assume that "he means well." The subtle controlling behavior he had to MC AND RIDDLE- Was that intended?! Did y'all's notice that too??!! And then forcing you to rest as if you weren't already planning that???? Next time he comes by, my reaction will be:
*Loads shotgun* Get off my porch. 👹
Ps. I mean to say, you wrote the characters really well!! Kudos and hearts to you 🫶 I love your writing
Thank you so much! That chapter went through five rewrites. So I’m glad that it turned out okay!😅
Trey is such a scary yandere because his personality is perfect for gaslighting. He’s so ‘well-meaning and nice’ so why would he ever hurt you? Sweet talking is perfect for manipulating your behavior, because he’s doing it for your best interest. Because, if you have no free will to make your own conclusions, how on earth can you consider him dangerous?
Because he means well.
But to point out him being controlling with Riddle.
Back when I was writing the earlier parts, I noticed that technically Trey could have been a yandere for Riddle with how he was acting. Sure, his silence was because of his trauma, but it could also be because of him using Riddle’s behavior to isolate him and basically be his only friend because no one else can stand him.
Here, it wasn’t actually intended, but it still fits.
Back on topic, MC’s just never eating Trey’s desserts again. No matter how delicious they look.
