This part is too funny for me:
Girl bully: "What? You gonna cry?"
Young Midori: "Actually, yeah."
Cuz MANNNN usually it's a "n-no..." But you wrote him straight up funny despite his "gloomy" attitude, he just really admitted it like he has foreseen everything. Thank you, i love how you added midori to the friends list (which is sooo rare! Especially without ryusetai, just him)
Originally, Midori wasnt even supposed to confront his bullies lmao. I wanted to make Midori upset and do the whole "He runs away crying and doubting their friendship" thing, but I erased that part because... it's too common imo. So I just made a funny situation out of it.
Also, I really like Midori. I wanna be besties with him www. I figured I can do that in the smau so I added him in. Live, laugh, love Midori.
Look at him. He's a little skrunkly.