I’m fucking invested in this story and like I’m in love with these characters. like here’s an except (I only have 1971 words so far...)
“There you go. Now you won’t get in trouble.” He turned to his neighbor, a bigger girl with dark hair tied up into a bun. Her eyebrow raised. “What?” He questioned her. Her head moved slightly as if she was rolling her eyes. I turned and walked a few feet toward the tip jar dropping the bill in. A high voice spoke from behind me.
“Why don’t you just ask for his number already Tony? We come here all the time and you’re always flirting.with him.” I took out three dollars from the tip jar.
“Shut up Sarah, I do not flirt with him.” Tony sounded defensive. The girl Sarah started imitating Tony’s voice.
“Oh here, take this tip cause your so cute, also you should take this tip-”. I heard a soft thud. “Ow what the fuck.” I turned around and started heading back to the register, and Tony and Sarah. Sarah was rubbing her arm as Tony looked prepared to strike again. Sarah looked at me. “Fuck he’s coming.” Tony turned around and quickly turned back. His face looked a little red, but it could have been the pulsing lights. I stopped in front of the register. Pretending I never heard the conversation. I placed the three dollars in the register and then grabbed my wallet placing it in my back pocket.
“Thanks again.” I flashed a smile at Tony.
“Don’t mention it.” He mumbled into his glass of ice. His face was clearly flushed. Sarah started snorting before busting out laughing. She leaned back in her stool before falling backwards off of it. Tony turned and stood up, a little to quickly, tripping over himself and falling