LoopJuice anniversary!! Happy two years to the fic that changed my life for the better!!! Iâm getting back into the groove of writing, and Iâm very excited to get back to writing Beetlejuice. Hopefully all my BJ fics will be getting updates in the near future!! Hereâs a drawing of Blucifer and the LoopJuice himself.
Chapter twenty-one of âLivingâ in the Present Tense, âAnd is there a moment where it all makes sense?, When saying goodbye doesnât feel like the end?â, is here! Woof. More pain.
Extras below!
- The lyrics for this chapterâs title are from âAmenâ by Amber Run! Such a good song about grief. Mostly meant to reflect how lost Beej feels, and how heâs in denial that the Maitlands are actually gone. (Are they? Who knows!)
- âHe wakes, rises.â - this is a lowkey reference to The Lady of the Lake from âThe Haunting of Bly Manorâ. The narration repeats something along the lines of, âShe would wake, she would walk, she would forget.â The characterâs grief and unwillingness to let go of her life before was a huge inspiration for his behavior in this chapter and onwards. Hereâs a link to a scene with her that makes me cry!
- âBeetlejuice was thrilled when some of his favorite books were added to all of their curriculums.â - imagine youâre like âugh gotta read this fuckass bookâ and you bring it home and your dad is like âGREAT GATSBY YAAAAYYYYâ
- âLaika loves hikes.â - she always has! Ever since she was tiny :)) throwback to when she ate a leaf the first time they took her outside lol
- âComet has rehearsal every week day evening.â - Comet is a thespian!!! They have an unnatural charm more than most demons, their voice and performances are enthralling to humans. They just like to be on stage hehe
- Wes - the first introduction to a character that is very important to Sawyer. You guys donât even know how much I daydream about their interactions. Itâs insane.
- âHe had questions about human society, about their healthcare.â - fun little secret for the people reading this. Sawyer will eventually become a doctor!
- âOn the outside, he was fuckinâ nailing it.â - wanted to emphasize that, despite how unraveled he appears in his narration, on the outside everyone (except Lydia) thinks heâs taking this shockingly well.
- âHe sat at the kitchen table and stared, unseeing, at the wall.â - lowkey reference to a Mitski song because I love her, and Iâm listening to that song a lot for one of my other fics. Itâs from âLast Words of a Shooting Starâ, and it goes, âTheyâll never know how Iâd stared at the dark in that room, With no thoughts like a blood-sniffing sharkâ.
- âWe watched some fun, strange movie from the 1980âs.â - it was âGhostbustersâ! What a bad choice for this situation lol
- âTheir horns⊠their horns were cut? Beetlejuice squinted hard. Their expression was weighed down by sorrow. Almost all of their jewelry was missing, including the crown. When had their horns been cut?â - the taking of their jewelry, and especially the cutting of their horns, indicates a significant loss of status or a severe attack from another demon. As we know from Beej, cutting off a demonâs horns is painful and, as he doesnât know, is quite demoralizing. Perhaps one day weâll know what happened to them.
- âHow long had they been missing their glasses? Did they have them the last time he saw them?â - they donât need their glasses, as previously stated. They wore them for the aesthetic. But still. Whereâd they go?
- âYes, heâd met Larryâs mother and twin brother before they were extinguished, of course.â - LORE DROP LOL. I was honestly not going to include anything else about them until Larryâs POV chapter, but they are just so important to who Larry is as a character that I couldnât not have a little section briefly discussing them. So, yes, Larry had an identical twin brother and a mother whom they loved dearly.
- âHe did remember that both of the little bear demons were nearly identical. But one had brown fur, while the other had white fur.â - as I just mentioned, Larry and their twin were identical. You can imagine just how devastating it was for them to lose him. Iâve mentioned in DMs to friends, and will in Larryâs POV, that sometimes they stare into mirrors and try to imagine what their brother wouldâve looked like if heâd gotten to grow up too.
- â âWhen my tail was long.â Larry clenched their fists at their sides. âWhen I could still⊠purr. Before Iâd even met my other mother. When I was one half of a whole.â â - the tail thing is a two-pronged thing. First of all, itâs a reference to the myth of the constellations Ursa Major and Ursa Minor, to explain why those bears have long tails and real bears donât. As mentioned in-text, Larryâs mother who passed was feline. A black leopard, to be precise. The only trait they inherited from her was a long, feline tail. They also had the ability to purr, like every other demon. It will be explained more later, but Larryâs other mother cut their tail and clipped their vocal chords after she took them in. Once again, this is all a glimpse into what made Larry the way they are.
- âThe dead-eyed, barely moving little thing who had lost all motivation and light. The one he had to drag along with him as they scavenged.â - after the loss of their mother and brother, Larryâs other mom took them in. She tried to fix them up to be the perfect little child to show off, but they were too caught up in their grief and too imperfect in her eyes. So she tossed them out to fend for themself, where they met Beej again and became proper friends.
- âThey had gored him with their horns the last time he tried to bring it up.â - mind you, this was right after it happened. Beej never tried to bring it up again. That was when they were like 10 years old.
- âThey hold on to anything and everything at the endâŠâ - this is a reference to one of my favorite lines from one of my favorite games, âNight in the Woodsâ. âAt the end of everything, hold onto anything.â Larry vehemently rejects this, and any idea of processing or caring. Until recently, that is.
- âCatch me, Iâm falling. Part of him is always agonizing. Part of him misses them so much it feels like heâs lost a limb. That part of him is still crying, please, Iâm sinking.â - some references to a song from âNext To Normalâ, since that musical influenced this Act somewhat, and Act Three VERY HEAVILY. The song is âMake Up Your Mind / Catch Me Iâm Falling (Reprise)â. The lyrics are intercut with other lines of dialogue, but the ones Iâm referring are âCatch me, Iâm falling / Sinking and sprawling / Maybe Iâll let myself fallâ.
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Chapter twenty of âLivingâ in the Present Tense, âShadows settle on the place that you left, Our minds are troubled by the emptinessâ, is here!
Iâm baaaaack! Capitalism cannot keep this guy down!! (Sorry itâs shortâŠ)
Extras below! Make sure to read the warning attached to the chapter!
- This chapterâs title is from âYouthâ by Daughter! One of my favorite songs in middle school. The lyrics are pretty self explanatory! Did anyone else see that âGravity Fallsâ pmv of that song way back when? It rules.
- Charles and Delia - FOR CLARITY! They are not super old!!! Just in their mid to late 50s. They are aging naturally and are fine, just showing signs of it. Itâs just freaking Beetlejuice out. Also, Delia only resisted being called âGrandma Dâ because she worried it aged her, she definitely views herself as the Beetlandlings grandma!
- Ash - it was never explicitly stated in this fic, but Larry didnât fully revive Ash. They couldnât put all of them back together. They will only last about 40 years after the accident, and they will never fully be back to themself. But theyâre making the most of it!
- âThe love they shared often seemed to be what made the world go âround.â - this is a reference to a line in âEpic Iâ from âHadestownâ, because I canât help myself! The original line is, âHades and Persephone, Remember how it used to be, Their love that made the world go âround?â
- â⊠purring to soothe themselves and each otherâŠâ - cats purr not just when theyâre happy, but also to self-soothe when theyâre nervous! So do the Beetlandlings!
- â⊠about where the blood on his hands had come from.â - itâs all his own! He broke quite a few of his nails off clawing at the wall.
- âTheyâd just⊠theyâd lost their most important people, too.â - a little sad hint that Beetlejuice views himself as somewhat of a lesser parent compared to Barbara and Adam.
- âThey could barely handle losing their beloved pet possum, how could they manage without any of their parents?â - itâs not directly going to be fully discussed, but Ragamuffinâs death hit the Beetlandlings hard. Death is a foreign concept to creatures like them, and seeing it first hand is very different and way more heavy-hitting than having it explained to them.
- âFuncle Ashâ - being nonbinary makes it hard to refer to someone when the relationship term is usually gendered, so they call them âfuncleâ as a silly compromise.
- âHe grimaces, and her demeanor becomes just a smidge more stern rather than gentle and concerned.â - Lydia was so ready for him to be up to his old bullshit, and knew her being a bit stern could help. But he was too far gone for any sort of method to help, unfortunately.
- âAsh had put on a fun comedy slasher for the kids, and given them each devices to play⊠was that Tetris?â - the movie is âTucker and Dale vs. Evilâ, because itâs fun and lighthearted while still gorey and silly enough to keep the young demonsâ attention! Also, itâs been proven that playing Tetris after a traumatic event can reduce the occurrence of intrusive memories / flashbacks! Ash was really hoping they could somewhat soften the blow of what happened that way.
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Rough WIP of the Loopjuice animatic ! Doing it in ibis paint frame by frame then gonna transfer to procreate to better animate and such (that's if I don't get burnt out)
@possum-quesadilla peeks at you (please notice the numbers thing I felt super smart doing that)
Enjoy these magma doodles of my favorite he/they/it demon based off chapter 5 from Time Is A Flat Circle by BlueBoogalo on ao3, by @possum-quesadilla (hi) go read it if you haven't it's so fuckin good
Also... I may or may not be working on a 2 1/2 minute long animatic of him to Hand Me My Shovel, I'm Going In by Will Wood and the Tapeworms...perchance...
Chapter nineteen of âLivingâ in the Present Tense, âMake the most of your life, while it is rife, While it is lightâ, is here! Iâm so sorry.
I fear this will be Chapter 9 of Timeâs Arrow all over again. Please read the warnings attached to the chapter!
Extras below! Also, Picrews of the beetlandlings!
- The title is from âFourth of Julyâ by Sufjan Stevens. I guess Beetlejuice shouldâve listened to that advice! The song itself is about the singer of the song speaking to his estranged mother as she dies in the ICU. Fun!
- âOrange you glad itâs Friday?â - I rewatched clips of the musical and decided Adam needed more dad jokes now that he was a dad. Hereâs a genuine note I wrote for myself when making this chapter lol
- âUndeterred, Adam pressed a kiss to the top of the thirteen year-oldâs head.â - SHEâS THIRTEEN NOW!! SAWYER IS TEN!! COMET IS SEVEN!!! AAAHHH!!! TIME MOVES FAST!!!!
- âOrange juice, toast with jam, bacon, eggs of a variety of preparations for their range of picky palates.â - the kids all are some flavor of neurodivergent. Theyâre all picky in their own ways for different reasons. Comet, for example, has AFRID like Beej!
- âComet clacked their teeth, squinting at Adam for a good while as they thought.â - they picked up the clacking from Beej and the squinting from Barbara (and Adam)
- âHe then made his way to the closed off back patio where his spouses were waiting.â - where Deliaâs art studio used to be!
- â âShe wished she was another species!â âThatâs not-â â - he was gonna say that isnât so bad, because he used to wish he was a breather.
- âWhatâs up, Com-Man?â - theyâre not a man, but allows him to call them âCom-Manâ because it sounds like âconmanâ, and they find that funny.
- The bet - while beetlands educate their kids well and encourage them to be curious and learn, the three of them do not fully understand the bet theyâve made. Theyâre just basing it off of something they overheard on TV and sorta understand. Itâs much funnier when kids talk so confidently about adult stuff they donât know a thing about than a kid knowing about adult stuff imo
- âTheyâd lost a few of their baby teeth that week after swan-diving out of a tree during recess.â - Comet is a wild child. Almost as much as Laika was. She calmed down as she got older, but sheâs still chaotic. Comet has yet to mellow out as they age. In fact, they were a chill baby, and theyâve become an insane little freak (/affec) as a child
- âComet clung to Beetlejuiceâs arm as he returned them to their usual size and set their siblings down, still wanting to be held.â - guys. Guys. Itâs so important to me that you understand just how much Comet loves their Papa.
- âAnd so were you, Bowie! Jigsaw was the only planned one.â - Bowie is a nickname for Comet. Because of David Bowieâs song, âStarmanâ. A comet is a shooting star! Jigsaw is a nickname for Sawyer, since âsawâ is in his name. Barbara and Adam have stopped trying to discourage it.
- âWhatâd you bet, Halley?â - as in Halleyâs Comet!
- âComet whooped, hair all a brighter shade of yellow as they turned to bound inside. ââThe Mummyâ time!â â - âThe Mummyâ is one of my favorite movies ever, so of course itâs one of Cometâs special interests. So are constellations and musical theater!
- Comet and Sawyer share what used to be Charles and Deliaâs master bedroom! Itâs not mentioned in the chapter because I couldnât really find a way to organically make it come up.
- â âSounds like a Sawyer problem.â Comet sat down on the ceiling, smiling at their father in a familiar, crooked way.â - hmmm. Wonder who they got all this from!
- âHe pondered this, briefly, his face screwed up with what seemed to be a mixture of annoyance and frustration like always.â - Sawyer isnât really pissed off all the time, he just has extreme RBF, sets boundaries pretty firmly, and speaks very straightforwardly. His family can tell when heâs genuinely angry and when he is just being Sawyer
- âEven Comet and Sawyer were still and uneasy, obviously not understanding what this torrid energy meant, but knowing instinctually that it wasnât good.â - young demons are hardwired with a mistrust of adult demons that arenât their family, mostly because of the way demons used to be. (Feral animals) And also because of the dog-eat-dog way the Depths operates.
- â(They knew they wanted to say that they were weaker than they used to be. Slowed down by injury and everything else. That they couldnât be relied on to fight for their family.)â - LOUD INCORRECT BUZZER! Barbara and Adam donât think that. Thatâs the mental illness speaking
- âThere were hoofsteps in the hallway, rapid but hesitant. Laikaâs.â - SHE GOT SCARED AND WANTED HER PARENTS⊠MY SHAYLAâŠ
Picrews of the kiddos!
Laika and Cometâs horns are supposed to be black and white stripes, and Cometâs horns arenât as grown as hers. I also tried to make it obvious that Cometâs hair is a different color at itâs roots but itâs hard to portray with the limits of picrew. Sigh. Anyways. The babies! (Also Laika and Cometâs noses are supposed to have a bit of fur but. Again. Limits of the mediumâŠ)
I did not mean to give Laika and Comet the exact same smiles. And Sawyerâs RBF isnât strong enough fr
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Chapter eighteen of âLivingâ in the Present Tense, âNot a lot, just forever, Intertwined, sewn togetherâ, is here!
Extras below!!
- The lyrics for this chapterâs title are from ânot a lot, just foreverâ by Adrianne Lenker! This song is so LITPT. It makes me cry actually.
- Say hello to Comet!!! I actually thought them up after I settled on Laika and Sawyer. I thought the sibling dynamics were missing something, so.. them! Thank you @c0zmo-writes for convincing me to add them
- âComet was the only one to inherit Beetlejuiceâs âmood ring hairâ, as everyone else called it. With fairly light brown roots, their âbase mood colorâ (as Lydia coined) was a yellow-ish, golden color, able to pass as a bright blonde.â - yaaaaayyyy a beetlandling has mood ring hair!!! They were partially inspired by the character Daisuke from âMouthwashingâ personality-wise, so their hairâs a little similar too! Like Bela, Cometâs colors are different from Beetlejuiceâs for the most part, but there are a few that are similar! Youâll see what I mean eventually.
- Eyes - THEIR EYES CHANGING HOW HE VIEWS HIS OWN EYES IS ACTUALLY SO IMPORTANT AND PERSONAL TO MEâŠ.
- â⊠Sawyer firmly asserted that their baby sibling was âstickyâ.â - based on my relationship with my older sister and my younger brother! Weâre both in our 20s, and she still views me as âstickyâ. Same with my little teenage brother. Itâs an interesting phenomenon! Once a baby, always a baby in your mind, I guess!
- âComet was⊠not the brightest bulb in the pack of bulbs.â - this is a saying in my family! Usually directed at me lol
- Comet and learning - they arenât intellectually disabled, nor do they have any specific learning disorder Iâd like to try to name. I know too little about those to try to diagnose. (Except auDHD.) They do learn these things, it just takes them longer than the average bear. Theyâve definitely got a form of auDHD like Beetlejuice, but theyâve got the proper support system to be able to work with it. It just takes them more time! Theyâre also. Just kinda dumb. A thembo, eventually.
- âSurely whenever his momma sweetly asked him to come give her a hug, flea medication in one hand, she wouldnât apply the awful stuff to the back of his neck?â - yes, Barbara and Adam use the exact same method theyâve been using on Beetlejuice for years to trick Comet. Remember when it happened in Timeâs Arrow? It STILL WORKS ON HIM. Also, this is based on my sisterâs idiot cat whom I love.
- â(He certainly couldnât even think of the other option. It simply wasnât an option.)â - he means having her live in / visit the Netherworld. Iâm sure that wonât give the kids any sort of complex!
- â⊠picking out school supplies with her auntsâŠâ - that includes Janet! Oh, imagining Laika being taken school supply shopping with Lydia, Ash, Janet, Bela, and Deb is so funny.
- âThatâs what Barbara and Adam reassured him, and what he reassured them of as well, when they expressed their worries to each other.â - LETâS FUCKING GOOOO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!!! HEâS CONFIDING IN THEM ABOUT HIS WORRIES!!!!
- âLaika crossed her arms firmly as she stomped over to her mother, her own little deer tail swishing in anger.â - I donât mention it in text, but they have to cut holes in their clothing for their tails. And I think thatâs super cute.
- ââChase me.ââ - why do little kids love being chased??? I donât get it. Every time I see my nephew he wants me to chase him. I hate being chased, itâs so scary.
- âSawyer turned and scampered towards the living room with a thrilled giggle, and he gave chase.â - guysssss heâs not afraid to play with them anymore Iâm gonna CRY AT MY OWN STUPID WRITING!! Also the way he plays with Sawyer is based on things my own dad used to do⊠Iâm having a feeling and I donât like it >:((
- âLaika, holding her motherâs hand and tugging her along, in her full human disguise, flashed a bright, flat-toothed smile at him.â - I gotta say, this must be so uncanny for Beej and the Maitlands??? Like. Your kid is suddenly. A human kid.
- ââCan we play restaurant?ââ - this is based off âBlueyâ because uh. After my dad left I have no concept of parents who actually play with their kids!
Youâll get Picrews of the kids with the next chapter, but for now, voice claims!!
Laika:
- Kid: Daveigh Chase as Lilo Pelekai in âLilo & Stitchâ, example:
https://youtu.be/3okU50_eqpQ?feature=shared
- Teen and up: Amy Poehler as Leslie Knope on âParks and Recâ, example:
https://youtu.be/NgD-h3uHP5A?si=MSV53G5IMgr5jMat
Sawyer:
- Kid: Macaulay Culkin as Kevin McAllister in âHome Aloneâ, Example:
- Teen and up: Josh Hutcherson as Mike Schmidt in âFive Nights at Freddyâsâ, example:
OR, Jeffery Combs as Herbert West in âRe-Animatorâ, example:
Comet:
- Kid: Isaac Ryan Brown as Gus in âThe Owl Houseâ SEASON ONE SPECIFICALLY, example:
- Teen and up: Jack Wolfe!! Examples:
https://youtu.be/T80ySub5CSc?si=EWcdMDQzbu25qo4U
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTMTaqC94/
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTMTaKSoV/
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTMTaXsKm/
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