#lostdreamsrpg

[barbiesofrp]

Hello, may we please get your opinion on our rp? Thank you so much!

First, let’s clap it up for Darren Criss as a mascot, that angelic piece of man. I want to say that I love love love this new theme. I was in the middle of giving an opinion before and you were changing the theme so I was like ah, fuck. But this theme is honestly 200 times better, so cute. That sidebar really gives the potential applicant an idea of what they’re applying for. The plot actually really interested me. It reminds me of Once Upon A Time’s perspective of Neverland, and how after a while, the kids didn’t really feel anything for their parents. I mean, that isn’t what your plot, but I like how they don’t really remember what the real world is, and when they do, that’s how nightmares begin. The only thing I don’t really like is the title texts you have for your pages. Like the Navigation banner on your nav page. The font seems so plain compared to everything else on your page. Overall, though, this roleplay looks sick and I would recommend it.

God, the theme and colors are just so sweet. The pink and blue match entirely and I love everything about it. Though, the rollover pic with Nina Dobrev in it — I don’t think the font was a good fit? But, maybe you guys should’ve added a shadow/stroke over it? Same thing with the headers you have for each page. Anyways, moving on — I am absolutely in love with the plot, kinda reminds me of Inception. This was the main thing that sucked me in. I just don’t like the fact in only focuses on teens/young adults because this whole RP could definitely be geared to a wide range of FCs! I adore everything about this place and wish the best of luck to the applicants, Jasper and Issa. This is the definition of perfection.

How cute is this! The color scheme and the graphics are all so adorable. It makes me feel like the roleplay is has that bubble-gum feel to it, you know? Everything is easy to read and it really caught my eye. I don't like the sidebar when I hover over it, though. The Nina Dobrev with that text looks kinda weird. I also don't like the different sizes in texts. Anyways, moving on! The plot sounds really cool and original! I've never seen anything like it. Originality strikes roleplay through your plot and it's a great thing to read. I love that this is OC and you included a most wanted. The only real thing that bothers me is the change in font size and the different font types you have on your page from the admin graphics to the headers and your sidebar, it's just a little busy. Otherwise, I recommend it.

[noellerps]

Noelle writes a first look review for: http://lostdreamsrpg.tumblr.com/.

What happened to all those kids. The boy who lived down the street from you so many years ago? The girl you saw on the news just yesterday? What happened to them. The missing kids who were never found but instead forgotten. They wound up here instead, their own little dreamworld. A place where you never age, never grow up, and never leave.

DISCLAIMER: Please know that whatever is written here is purely Noelle’s opinion and it’s not meant to offend, insult, or belittle anyone. We can always agree to disagree.

Please like this post once you’ve read it. Thank you!

URL;

The URL is direct but not exactly my cup of tea so it didn't catch my attention much. It's still a nice URL though so ignore my personal preference.

THE LOOK;

I like the color scheme. It doesn't hurt the eyes. The theme is pretty neat too. I'm a fan of hovers and all that fancy stuff so plus points. The font is a bit small but I really don't have a problem with small fonts because the font itself is cute. Your mascots are pretty nice too! I love Crystal Reed and I don't see Darren Criss often so points for you there. I think they fit the RP.

The only thing I will comment on are the graphics. The bigger sidebar graphic was too confusing for me. I didn't really know what I was looking at. It was hard to find the focus of the image. I wish you didn't make the text of the image transparent so it could pop out a bit and it would add layers to the image. For the second sidebar graphic, I think it would look better if the text wasn't on Nina's face. You could probably add shadow to the banners in the pages to make them look prettier too. Also, I don't know what the icon was. Try something more eye catching for that, or you can just add a text there.

BIOS;

N/A

PLOT;

The plot itself is interesting. It didn't capture my attention much at first, but when I reached the second paragraph, I really liked it. The length is okay. Not too short and not too long. I do have to comment on some things though, like the first few sentences of the plot. "There is a world that one usually visits when they sleep. This dreamworld is only accessible while one sleeps. We all dream, therefore we’ve all been there." This part seems a bit repetitive, but that could just be me. There were a few grammatical errors and typos in the plot too, but all in all, you have a pretty nice RP plot! Try to proof read it or ask for a RPH to edit it for you and you're all set!

WOULD I JOIN THIS RP;

It's not really my type of RP so I don't think I will join. However, I like the originality of the RP so I'm hoping you get a lot of apps soon! Your admins are very nice and the idea of the RP is interesting too. Keep up the good work, and don't get discouraged by the lack of apps at this point. I've seen you around the tags a few times. You're doing an awesome job at promoting so far. Best of luck!

TOTAL RATING: 3.5/5

[noellerps]

Hi Noelle, may we please get a first look review?

Sure thing! Added to my to-do list!

[rantingrpg-blog]

lostdreamsrpg?

Ayy sweets, we got your first message too, your review should be up by tomorrow because Rowen just went to bed and she was proper excited to do your URL, please be patient. Sorry for the wait but I promise you it'll be worth it.