Script Overflow
While thumbnailing, I realized something was off—the plot kept expanding beyond control.
It was meant to be a 12-page short, but it’s already 15 pages and not even halfway through.
I had to start over and write a proper script.
Result? 2,000+ words for a 10-page draft… and the pacing still feels rushed.
Also: Minegishi still hasn’t spoken once.
So I’ve decided—he’ll only have one line in the entire comic.
If your main character is silent for 10 pages, it might be a problem.
But if he speaks once in the whole book… that’s intentional.
















