My vision of Isadora's two kids, Mia and Maya
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My vision of Isadora's two kids, Mia and Maya
“Can you make dinner happen?” I almost asked, but I caught myself in time; it had been my turn to make dinner tonight, and so what I was asking him was a favor, and that meant I needed to use politer language. Thus, “Do you suppose you could do something about dinner?” was what I actually asked. I was too exhausted to give him the puppy-dog eyes that were the emoji part of that particular speech pattern, but I trusted him to get the message anyway.
I love writing Maya, she is such an utter delight, especially when she is at her most goblin-like 😂
I almost feel bad for all the shit I'm gonna put her through
I wrote a little bit of advice for @max-rambles a bit ago, and I thought I'd share an example of what I mean about "using words to measure time" from my WIP, below the cut.
I needed to convey that it took a long time for Raymond to arrive at the office after Riley called him there, and that means that I need the prose to continue for at least a few paragraphs. So first, Maya gets distracted by her body (her thirst, her discomfort), which takes a little time. Then I think, who's around? Well, Riley's around, what could they do? They could get her another bottle of water, and I can make them look a little mysteeeerious by being sneaky about it.
Okay, so she takes the water. How does she do it? Well, she's still feeling a little manic, so she snatches it up... but maybe she's starting to calm down, so she catches herself forgetting her manners, and that uses up a little more time, and there's a fun little made-up fact banter scenelet.
That leaves Maya, and the reader, relaxing on the tail end of a higher-intensity scenelet before Raymond finally gets there and the scene proper can start, and it feels like a long time since the message because it was.
...or something like that. that's how my imaginary hypothetical reader reacts, at least 😅
Drove myself to tears today thinking about the horrible stuff I'm gonna be putting my blorbo through a few chapters down the line. I'm so sorry honey! I promise it's for a good reason!
Twenty-Five Percent teaser
I've started writing a new story in an original world, and I thought I might share a bit here. I suppose I might call the genre "hard comp-sci-fi," and here's a little blurb:
Autistic software engineer Maya Brown makes an unbelievable discovery: exactly one quarter of all computing power in the world is being wasted because of one error in a single line of code. When the manufacturer ignores her bug report, she turns to other methods to distribute the fix and in so doing, Maya unknowingly sets off events that will change the face of software forever.
Yes, I know this has a very specific audience 😅
I feel really bad about all the shit I'm about to put my main character through.
I mean, that's not gonna stop me, but I do feel bad about it.
Twenty-Five Percent excerpt
First draft of chapter 1 is finished and around 6k! I've excerpted a spoiler-free bit of the draft under the cut; I'll probably start serializing it to scribblehub once I manage to get a few beta eyes on it, but I'll also post here when I do.
Let me know if you'd like a tag when the full chapter is up!
In 1921, White rioters destroyed a beacon of Black prosperity and security. They killed as many as 300 black Tulsans, left thousands homeless, and ransacked an entire neighborhood. At the time, there were no prosecutions of the instigators. Almost a century later, there have been no reparations. This is what happened, and why it still matters today.
This article gives information on the Tulsa riots and how it plays into the Watchmen universe.