Female Character Descriptions Within Literary Works
I’m currently an intern for a publishing company, more specifically, a literary agent. I go through a lot of their emails where the literary queries come in and one of my main responsibilities is to take a look at the query letters and the first five pages of a person’s manuscript and either pass it on for the agent to take a look at, or kindly reply to tell the author their work isn’t quite what we’re looking for.
A lot of times it’s simply a matter of voice within the writing, but sometimes I get really crazy stuff in my inbox. You can write a great story about most topics, most - but I do get some wildly....creative...concepts that just won’t work or unfortunately a writer’s literary skills just aren’t up to par and their book is not ready to be published. That being said, there’s another category that has become popular in my short time as an intern and it’s really very alarming.
There’s a very bad trend of submissions from male writers who describe female characters in really disgusting ways. People may assume it's a stereotype, but I can confirm to you from going through these literary queries that there is a huge issue with older men writing books about teenage girls in particular.
Men old enough to be grandparents (who even mention in their query letter that they're grandparents) are describing teenage women changing their clothes in a sexual manner and focusing on erotic descriptions of their bodies when it is completely uncalled for.
This is not an isolated incident either. I've seen this time and time again in these submissions and mind you, I'm often only getting the first five pages of these authors' books. That means this type of description of young women is within those beginning pages. Today alone I got at least three queries that included this type of description.
I will be attaching some of these descriptions so that what I am talking about is understood, but I will be blacking out any author names or book titles to prevent trouble. I also apologize if Tumblr is turning the image quality to trash for all of these.
This is a letter I received. It seemed normal and I was intrigued to hear what the author was going to present in his five pages. I was very alarmed and disappointed to find the following:
One female character then goes on to call the other “a slut” and the character is described to be “in heat.” I was obviously kind of horrified by this, but soon realized it was going to be a common theme in a lot of queries.
The fact that men would be describing young women, or any woman, like this within the first few pages of their book suggests there’s a larger issue here that many of us are already familiar with. Young women, and women in general, are over-sexualized in our media, especially by men.
I think this is something we all need to become more aware of and try to correct within our own writing and the writing of our friends and loved ones. This is certainly not to say that men can never write stories about teenage women and that women or non-binary people can never fall prey to this in their writing as well, but the female perspective is important, cannot be overlooked, and men who write about teenage women should be held in check for what they are writing and creating.